Jo_J
While I'm not a fan of this type of stories but I enjoyed this one. I like how slow it is, it goes well with the bet they have deal with in a year. It gives a lot of time for many things to happen and I'll admit I'm a little curious about it. I don't know if the author knows that much about European history or you had to research it but it's a pretty good inclusion in the story. The writing quality is great and aside from minor mistakes in spelling or grammar I can't say much about it. Overall it's a great read
Awesome Book !!! The novel has a good plot and is promising. I love the pacing of the novel and the way writer writes the story. The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is nice and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come . And hope that the writer will continue this awesome work and will evolve even more with time . Mine best wishes are always with you .[img=recommend][img=recommend]
ssfx3yuchens here with honest review. Honestly I have to say I am quite taken with this story, it is relaxing and easy to read and understand, and the pacing is good. I enjoyed it a lot. In overall, there are a few noticeable grammatical errors in the beginning, but other than that, it's really good. The plotline looks promising[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
You know what you want to write, but the issue is grammar and incomplete sentences. I think you publish without editing them? Write and post? That's totally fine, but sometimes reading your story out loud helps with editing. If it doesn't roll off the tongue smoothly, then change it. Besides that, I think you're good. The idea and the thought are there for the readers to recreate and reimagine. Just keep writing and you'll improve. I was like you when I started since English wasn't my native language. Good luck to you!
The characters are adorable. Both Jo and Matthew are really cute, and they do seem to act like a couple already. The story development is really good. It's not too slow, but it's not fast either. The writing quality is good. I do feel there can be improvements though. Some of the sentences feel a little awkward when reading. Overall, I do like the story, despite romances not really being my cup of tea.
Be honest, don't you get annoyed by the annoying cliche reviews. 'great story' 'amazing characters' bwaaaah. Those suck for me. Any who, [img=update]. I like your story so you get a vote. if I could gift you I could, but I'll keep reading and I'll you can expect a gift from me. Fan's should let consistent voting do the reviewing[img=recommend] P.S. I'm in love with your characters.
I like the story... It is well written and easy to understand. It makes me want to travel to all those wonderful places... If you could change the synopsis and make it something more interesting, I'm sure your book will get more reviews !! My honest review - I very much liked it... And I want to continue with the reading... Please continue with your updates :) :) Good Luck !! :)