This is the author's review of his own Fan-Fiction.
In my honest opinion, this story isn't bad. In fact, I believe it to be above average compared to some of the other Fan-Fictions on this site. It has its ups and downs, but I believe that there are more positives than negatives.
The writing quality is better compared to others which are written by people where English isn't their primary language.
The story is at a decent pace, but sometimes it speeds up or slows down to a snail's pace out of nowhere.
I would consider the character of the MC to be confusing at times. Although he may act one way in one section, he would act in another is another section.
However, a major problem it has is that the chapters of this story has an unstable update rate. Sometimes it takes a few weeks for a new chapter to be posted and other times it takes only a couple days. This means that it may take over a year for this Fan-Fiction to reach 50 chapters.
This is all my opinion as a reader, reading through my own story. It is up to you guys to properly discern whether or not you should follow this story.