Bent Reality

So, I saw you request a review in the Forums. Since I'm bored, I'm here to write a review on a novel with a single chapter of 2k words. Anyway, I'm half-asleep when I read CH.1, so please bear with me. Bout' the writing quality - top tier! Yeah, I haven't seen someone write good Engrishu on this site for a while. There's no criticism for the wording, but... except Edward... I wasn't given a name. So I was confused reading through his and hers without signs who was who. But still, kinda' like a prologue maybe, so there aren't any names yet, or at least that's what I observed after reading it a single time. Oof, minus points! I was confused! That's a sign of bad writing. JK! Story... I didn't understand shit! Is the author Mexican? Spanish? There were some words I didn't understand. I think they are there as intended, but maybe they're from another language or something... Well, I think the story was good, if I was able to understand it better. As I said, I was half asleep. Hmm... There's nothing to criticize really... There are many to be praised. But this is still a single chptr'd novel, I'll update if it gets updated a little bit more too. One question tho: Is this book for some kind of meme or something? A thug gorilla person? Eren's shirt? You mean Eren from AOT? Cap positioned sideways - and the beastman who wore it was apparently as a gorilla? Is this racism from the author? No, of course, it's not. I was just skeptical. Now, there's my review. Wouldn't add anything. Short but I think I explained my view clearly. Will update later, if it gets 1k chapters or something. Yeah. Humble my ass. Great book: 9/11 - will read again,

All I can say is...brilliant! Who wrote this? This is so amazing. Read it! You won't regret it! Totally recommended for those who have bizawr and exotic yet refoined and egzquizite taste.

This story is lit! With a talented author, this novel was in good hands. I gotta say I'm impressed! Accompanied with hard work and perseverance, this will pave well in the future! Good luck author and may your novel be blessed with more readers!

Your story seems interesting. But maybe it'd be better if u fix ur prologue because i don't fully understand it. Keep up the good work though. You can certainly still improve your work👍

This novel is written cleverly and very well, even though it only has 1 chapter atm, the writing style is great and everything flows well, however I didn't understand some aspects. Otherwise great work author!

I'm pretty impressed. Typically stories involving goblins are lame. But this one is actually impressive. A definite good read. I just hope the author finds a cover and uses more tags to get noticed soon.

Honestly nothing to nit-pick at. It's a little early in the story to make a serious review, but the charactar design is great so far. Writing qualits is nice as well but could be a bit more descriptive. Everything else will have to wait for later, keep up the good work :)

Very nice! The writing is poetic and beautifully detailed! I love the fantasy elements and how thought out the world and the races are. Such great planning and scripting deserves a lot of praise. It gives me DND vibes when reading it, which is actually really enjoyable. Some good characters, and I like how the author doesnt shy away from harsh and sometimes brutal description, but also laces it with humour. Very nice