Langya Talent 2
Is it only me who really dislikes MC who transmigrate and mope around until they gain a system, creating a character whose only positive points are created by chance might be easy but is not something valuable for further plot progression. Systems are generally very easy to write, hard to balance and take away a major part of the excitement and mystery of a cheat. Anyway, the MC doesn't use his cheat intelligently, the OC are generic and sexual themes are everywhere. The characters are 12-13, why is everything about the other gender? Background of this world, the MC and the OCs is also very weird, almost like the author didn't care and just wanted to get to the good part of the story.
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The translation seems pretty terrible especially when it comes to levels. It is really inconsistent. The idea behind the cheat is pretty good. Personally, I think this idea has potential as it isn't super overpowered and the MC still has to work for his power, but at the same time I feel like it could be nerfed a bit more. As for the characters, they are horribly inconsistent. One minute you have people groping each other in the chow hall and the next you have the author talking about how conservative people are in this world and they aren't familiar with those sorts of things. The author can't seem to make up their mind of the characterizations/world setting which is unfortunate.