1 1.Finally

(Hello, fellow author here, I would just like to say thank you for reading, and that I'm just a beginner in writing, so I would appreciate it if you gave me some advice a long the way, don't roast me too much! Also, I would like mistakes being pointed out by you guys so I could fix them. I'm only 13 years old, so don't expect too much! Thank you again!) (I would also like to point out that this story is heavily inspired by 'Goddess Creation System')

"Tch, look at her, how can she still be able to show up at school?" A girl with blond hair commented, this girl was called Jung Ji Soo, she was extremely beautiful, having milky skin, beautiful brown eyes, and was also thin compared to Ji Hyun, actually, everyone in this school was thin compared to her.

Ji Hyun could only look down at the ground while slowly making her way to class. Yes, she's tried losing weight before, multiple times, but her craving for junk food was too much and at the end, she resulted in more weight instead of losing them. It was devastating for her, the fact that these girls maintain to lose fat in such a short time, and it was more devastating that she couldn't even run without losing her breath every 5 seconds.

Ji Hyun made her way to her seat, her desk filled with previous drawings of pigs, and many hateful slurs. Everyone in this class basically degraded her and looked down on her. Except one person, Do Hyun, he was an extremely kind person, not to mention very popular because of his handsome looks. He was the only person who treated her like a person, and not some fucking animal.

"Hey, piggy, ever thought of losing your damn fat?" A boy yelled from the back of the class, resulting in people laughing. She thought 'I don't even know why they laugh, it's not even funny.' Suddenly a voice spoke out.

"Cut it out." It was Do Hyun, her saviour. She blushed at his voice, she was so grateful to him, always helping her out, and she even thought of him as a friend, though she wanted something more ever since she realized her feelings for him. Ji Hyun glanced at him, and he smiled, revealing his white teeth that shone like a white pearl. Of course, being the awkward girl, she quickly looked away.

2:34 PM, afterschool.

Ji Hyun was walking, getting weird stares from people, she sighed. Someone tapped on her shoulders, making her frightened.

"Oh, shit. I'm sorry, I didn't mean to frighten you." A cheerful deep voice spoke. She turned around to find Do Hyun, his nose and ears red from the cold. It was currently winter, and it was pretty cold outside. Ji Hyun blushed again, feeling embarrassed for making a fool out of herself. She immediately responded

"No, It's honestly fine." She nervously laughs, he smiles back at her.

"The reason I bothered you was because I wanted to, uh, you know- ask a question." He seemed nervous.

"No, you would never bother me at all!- Uh, I mean. what's the question?"

"Well, I wanted to ask you if you wanted to...go out...with me..?" Do Hyun looked anxious, and he took her completely by surprised, 'THE Do Hyun is asking me to go out with him?! This is fucking lucky!'

"OF COURSE- I mean, sure." Ji Hyun smiled, he let out a breath of relief, then grinned.

"Well, great! I'll see you at xx cafe in sunday." He said as he backed away slowly,

"For sure!" She yelled back, he then turned away while wearing a goofy smile on his face. 'I'm such a lucky girl to be able to get asked out by such a perfect guy! Could this be true love?'

3:12 PM, afterschool, Saturday

Ji Hyun was walking around, doing some window shopping, she was currently looking for a dress for the upcoming event. She was all warm inside, feeling a bit excited, no, EXCITED AS FUCK! She thought about the day finally coming, all the conversations, and maybe, even a kiss. As she walked closer to a cafe, she overheard some people talking outside.

"You seriously asked her out?!" One of them exclaimed, a laugh came from someone.

"Sure I did, she's so naive, to think a man like me could ever fall for her. Good thing I take acting classes." She overheard one of the boys from that group talk, and she recognized that voice, it almost sounded like Do Hyun, she didn't mean to listen further but then she heard "She's probably daydreaming about you right now, eating, just like the fat ass she is." They all laughed.

Now she realized it, IT was Do Hyun. Her heart broke into a million pieces, all her hopes were crushed within a few seconds. 'Is this who he really was? Was everything a lie?' Ji Hyun quickly ran, she didn't know where she was going, all she knew was that she wanted to get out of that place as soon as she could. This was probably the fastest she ran, not even caring that she was going some where she didn't recognize. After a few minues of running, she stopped, she was desperately trying to catch her breath. She looked around and realized she was close to the ocean, she was standing on the edge of a cliff. Her eyes were filled with tears, crying non-stop.

Soon, she snapped, she couldn't even think anymore. She yelled with all her might, "Why do I get picked on for being different?! What did I do wrong?" She then proceeded to scream, but it was muffled by the cars that were passing by. 'Everything will be okay if I just jump, right?' Without thinking, she jumped.

Her body made a splash in the ocean, the impact causing her to shriek, she couldn't breathe, suffocating. She began to lose concious, and then she thougy 'Finally...it's over.'

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