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Shameless Author gives himself a 5 star rating and gets caught by the FBI. Hmm let's try this again. Hello everyone I'm the author of this Novel and I'm new to this website. I love the Demon Slayer franchise and I saw a massive sin. There was no Fanfics of it out there. So yeah I decided to write my heart out. Hope everyone likes my story
Protagonist has a wolf '-' I need to say something more IIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII
The writing style is pretty nice, but the grammatical issues are far and endless, when it comes to spelling errors, you did a good job. The stability of Updates is great! And the Story and World Background and Development I also approve of. The character design could use a little more work though. For example, adding some scenes to clearly illustrate the personality of the MC. Currently, I only see his unique appearance, and all his other "Personalities" are nulled because I can't really see what you're trying to convey if you were trying to outline his personality. I do know he really likes wolves and his family. But that's about it. As a fellow demon slayer fanfiction writer, I would love to see you succeed, so keep up the good work! (Also just a personal opinion, a harem in Demon Slayer might be good if you write it correctly, but if you ignore the partners of the girls in the harem, I feel like that is just cruel. And also.... technically... there are six of your reviews that should be nulled because three people gave three consecutive five-star reviews. Good job though.)
Huh is that a TCF reference???? You know there are not many TCF fans here. Oh by the way, our friendly neighborhood author, if you stop *smiles* please continue writing P.S. I should be commenting on that specific chapter. However, I did not at that time. And I am too lazy to go search for it. Also me writing this explanation here kills my habit of being lazy. Anyway good one.
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