Mhizta_Ray
I don't think this novel is that good its pretty inconsistent and its like he's always falling in dungeon Maybe because i am not that sympathetic to his humanitarian beliefs that I don't like that he is always trying to be friendly to human even when they keep on attacking him .Ofcourse i don't Want him to an edgelord and keep on saying "humanity is my enemy ", But its like I am reading just an cliche story with all that 'chosen one' and hero complex Mc and its evolution is truly bad till now at least this story is more of a furry human than a beast I am sorry Author if i hurt your feelings or anything but this ain't cup of my tea
Overall: Nice idea, bad grammar, written as bad as some other weird translates chinese novels on WN. It sometimes feels like reading something from a child. Sentences are kinda wrong, entire words missing, some letters missing, and overall the formatting is nearly non-existing. Most of the time you can't even know if it's his thoughts, what he has said out loud, or whatever. And no sentence structure, too. Dunno, I can't pay for that story... If the story would be out on one of the free english novel sites like RR etc., okay. But paying for that? Big no no! I read all the free chapters, by the way. Not worth the time and money, in my eyes. Sorry.
I don’t really write reviews but since I read until the current chap I might as well give some feedback. The writing quality is iffy it’s not the worst but it’s definitely not the best. The author is pretty stable with his updates so you don’t have to worry about much on that front. Now for story development there really isn’t much of any. Granted we are only 86 chapters in so I guess you could just chalk it up to it being slow paced. The character design and world background is where this novel truly fails. The characters are pretty generic nothing to really write home about except for the mc and that’s in a bad way. The mc for lack of better terms is an idiot. He reincarnates into a world he knows nothing about and doesn’t even try to find out any general knowledge unless it comes up in a conversation which he just gets made fun of for not knowing anything. He’s more of a go with the flow kind of guy with no real goals or aspirations. Like how he joins the knight academy just because the girl he meets wants to join it. I just mentioned the mc not knowing anything about the world he’s in so we the readers also don’t know anything about the world. Overall I would give this a 2/5
This book has been great so far and am loving every bits of it. A splendid work of imagination and art. Bravo, author. Bullies in school this days can be very tiring and annoying. Look at how they made Ray end his life dead after being hit by a truck. He funny thing is that, he reincarnated as a rabbit. That's funny.
Overall it is fine idea and good story for newbies. Indeed it had great potential. Ray start from someone literally always rnning away, now bcame someone up to the challenge. Sorry but for me, you may wish to added more character like Lily and his little pet to gave more feeling to the story. but who i am but a noob. so well. Keep it up Author. Learn and keep your progress. I like it so far.