Batman in MCU
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this story is like you are just trying to put dc batman in marvel examples Talia al ghul dated batman while he was training you are doing the same for elektra George Stacy and commissioner Gordon and you want his daughter to be the batgirl like Barbra from there I just dropped
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So far I'm okay with the current Batman story. It's just that the writer doesn't show the growth in Batman's strength which I think is just like that and also for the villains whose appearances are too fast not to be made per arc so that the development of Batman's sidekick character can be developed again. Please don't forget other superhero characters like Spiderman. That is all and thank you!
Itβs so good, only thing bad is how long it takes to update, though the author probably has life stuff getting in the way.
To the AUTHOR, Hope the MC becomes ANTI-HERO with Strong sense JUSTICE, But in a balance way of the world in Grey not in Black and White. As it is mix of comics(Earth-616) N movies(MCU). Make his suit mix of black and grey Assassin type suit with the mix of Uru, Admantium, Vibranium with defensive runes and magic in Nano-Tech instead of Spandex. Change Mutants into Meta-Humans. MC- Make him a Nigh Immortal with unlimeted potential, Master in Combat Arts(All Martial arts, Weaponary as well as Chi, etc.,), Magic , Runes , Smith/Smithery, Science( Math, Che , Phy, Bio), a brain better than super-computer all in all a master to every thing to level according to author leveling system. Make MC save Earth from Pollution, making the Earth richer in Natural, Chi, Ki/Qi Mana and cosmiic energy and teach people of Tech-Magic(Technomancy), Chi and Many other Arts. Also kindly Bring the Asian Characters as there are Western Characters. Make MC better than all of them as Jack of all trades and as well a master of all so to say "Perfectum" but make all of them get powers above as it cited in Paragraph. As it an OP comment not make it OP just make it slowly step by step for making MC more OP. Thanks- Reader!
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good work . just keep the chapter coming . .....................................................................................................
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Getting interesting. Corrupt cops. Just kill them. Nice. Cant wait for more.Nice. Cant wait for more.Nice. Cant wait for more.Nice. Cant wait for more.
Loving the story so far. Cant wait for more..................................................................................................................
Good story. Hope that it will good in future too. I have a request for the author that Try to make chapters long above 1K words................
I love the story it just doesn't seem to have a flaw.
I have a weird relationship with this fanfic. I start reading, come across a random chapter and decide it's not that good. Then one day, for whatever reason, I decide to re-read from the first chapter and think maybe I judged the story too harshly. So I come across a random chapter and decide it's not that great. I've been on this cycle since 2020 and it will stay like this forever. 9.5/10
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Esperaba mΓ‘s de este fic, comenzΓ³ bien durante los primeros capΓtulos y luego *BAM* mata a los padres para darle una especie de fondo trΓ‘gico... luego se va y vende drogas?? WTF.Es un fic bastante inconsistente, prΓ‘cticamente es canon marvel, con una mezcla rara de personajes en un intento de reemplazar a los de DC. El autor mantiene a Jeff (MC) como un personaje con habilidades de artes marciales y eso es...(No bΓΊsqueda de chi ni ningΓΊna habilidad relacionada a las artes marciales ) Aparece incluso batwoman y nightwing de la nada, supongo que es un posible intento del autor para recrear a la familia bat?? Nose ... muy raro y poco interesante. PrΓ‘cticamente es la copia de batman en marvel a pesar de no ser la misma persona.
everything is great but I've literally seen the MC being wannabe batman (read till chapter 60) he could have done so much and when someone dies he cries and says I should have had more power but MC could literally any day go to Kamar-Taj or get juiced up on serums.
I've read through 16 chapters, and this is some pretty bad storytelling. The writing quality is poor at best. POV's are incredibly confusing. Story jumps around with no real proper pacing and there's no character development whatsoever.
achei legal, pena que nao e diario, mas e legal pena que o MC nao se chama Bruce, mas para uma fanfic e umas das poucas que realmente querem ser mais original do que apenas ir pegando personagens e juntando tudo ao inves de criar seus proprios personagens originais e fazer eles evoluirem junto dos personagens da marvel