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The story is nice... And ooh btw I'm an Indian Army too... I purple you ππ... Thnx for the story... Although I have to give one suggestion to the author : please do check the story thoroughly before you post it... There were a lot of mistakes which could be seen clearly. However we 'armys' appreciate your effortππ
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I'm not trying to say that it's a huge problem but still I think it's a bit hard to read it.(I suck at grammars and punctuation too, so, I am not smn who can speak on this...still....) The synopsis felt okay and the rankings is genuinely high so, I gave it a try but......not up to expectations considering the others on top... Still, author-san jiayou!!