denthoughts
I like this novel even more as the story progress. I wish there's more new chapters release every week. As of now, FL's background is still a mystery. It's fun to see the ML aka the dragon is chasing FL wholeheartedly. I can't imagine what's going to happen between them once he manage to caught her. Good job, dear author!
Alright. Here's another hidden gem from this author. Since you promised us that you'll never drop all your novels, I read all of it. I don't know how you manage to write all 3 novels at the same time, but I loves your works. Even though I want this novel to have new chapter release every day but 3x/week is still acceptable consider your circumstances.
I feel that the idea of this book is a perfect mixture between eastern and western fantasy which I love. The plot moves along at a moderate speed. Regarding the development of the world, I shall currently reserve my thoughts and wait till more chapters is released to create a more accurate judgement. The grammer has no super obvious errors though the vocabulary used is not complex enough to my liking (HAHA that's just me though.) Descriptions could also use more detail to create a more vivid impression in the readers minds. Updates are consistent but a bit slow now. Please give more chapters •\\\• All in all, a relatively fresh idea in a sea of Asian books! Do try this story out if you're the type to like stories on soulmates.
Some grammatical and syntax issues, and in some places hard to understand, but overall a great book. If it was finished, that would be awesome but she hasn’t uploaded in almost a year, so don’t expect anything, enjoy it for what it is, and be prepared to not know the ending. The beginning was a little too slow, almost 80ish chapters devoted to like, one day in the book, which is excessive. It picks up as far as time frame as it goes on. It’s hard to know who the “main” character is as it gets side tracked by another two characters stories, that, while essential to the plot, vie for the position of lead. Physical descriptions could use a little work, with things like color, size, texture and just appearance over all. For an armature writer, she’s pretty good, and for her well edited chapters, great. Tbh, if she worked on some of the stuff above mentioned, she could get this published by a real book company- the story is great so far. I’d love to see how it ends, so I hope she finishes it soon. With an ending, and better editing, 9/10. The way it stands now, 7/10. Either way, better than half the stuff in here. Good job author. ✌️
This Book is an Absolute Jem and a must read for anyone who enjoys slice of life romantic comedies. The plot twist and turns are action packed and the funny reactions between all the Bold and Colorful Characters will keep you on the edge of your seat rolling with laughter. You definitely can't go wrong picking up this great read!