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Reviews of Awakening of the Ancient: Rise of the Fallen

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saske_uchi
saske_uchiLv3saske_uchi

I didn't even read this novel but I gave 5 star reviews because of my craze for Rise of Demon God. Please don't concentrate on other novels and give your 100% on writing the 1st novel. I am eagerly waiting for your chapters everyday so do try posting atleast 2 chapters a day for Rise of Demon God. Do not stop posting. All the best. Just post continuously we will make your novel best in the ranking with our power stones and best reviews.

totallyNotGarfield
totallyNotGarfieldLv2totallyNotGarfield

I've already read "Rise of the Demon God", and I saw that you wrote more novels. I gave it a shot and it was good! I'd like to say that the description is somewhat confusing. It indeed gave information about the novel, but not the way it should've done. It seems rather forced, and as I said, confusing.

Manvinder01
Manvinder01Lv5Manvinder01

Have to be honest one of the best book I have been reading absolutely a gold mine....love how the charactor are be introduced and love back story of everyone in it so far..... I hope it won't be dropped....

Wallabalooza
WallabaloozaLv3Wallabalooza

There are quite a few issues with this story. First and foremost is how absolutely slowly it moves. By chapter 20, the story has barely even begun, and it took about 11 chapters to reach what should have essentially been the first. This feels like a result of you going into extreme detail about backstory and world building before even giving the reader a chance to care about your characters. These are things that should have been introduced gradually, and less forcefully, as the story progressed, not all at once at the beginning. You also have a tendency to over explain things a lot. This not only takes up 200+% more words than you need to, it gets very tiring to read. The grammar is okay, but not great. You use "!!!!" and "???" and chatroom-like syntax, and it makes your story come off as if written by an overly excited teenage girl (which may be the case, I don't know). Your dialogue tends to be heavy eye-roll material as you often use it for exposition, making your characters come off as robotic and unrealistic. Backstory should not be forced into dialogue. It kills a story. And you've done that /a lot/ in yours, and right from the start as well. You've got a few interesting ideas and some potential, but the way you write seriously needs an overhaul. Spend a little time reading better written works, see how they do things and try to reach where you are at Ch20 in 2-4 chapters instead. Good luck.

AsunaKaoru
AsunaKaoruLv6AsunaKaoru

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TheGentlemenWorld
TheGentlemenWorldLv5TheGentlemenWorld

After years of study on literature and novels in general, I have finally had a revelation. Cultivation novels are retard magnets that try to forcefully make the reader feel smarter. I have read so many comments, in cultivation novels specifically, that make me want to bash my head into a wall that I can no longer not say this. Wait a minute What if I'm mistaken? You see, most cultivation novels have a certain tag next to it: Harem. That's it! Harem novels are the true retard magnets! That's why ever fanfic harem novel I've ever read has made me want to puke my guts out! I can see clearly now!

Alen_Walker_5965
Alen_Walker_5965Lv2Alen_Walker_5965

Good immersive story. Though I wish it would have more chapters. So good so far.............................................................

Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthorDemonic_angel

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king_Sake
king_SakeLv3king_Sake

mani I'm honestly just doing this for the xp so don't take my review seriously ight so just don't look past this point why tf are u still reading

Jhone_K
Jhone_KLv2Jhone_K

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ToxicPickle
ToxicPickleLv2ToxicPickle

story is amazing i really recommend u read it the build up is big but the payoff is amazing love the story and if i have the money i would buy coins for it

Jerry55
Jerry55Lv3Jerry55

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Skull_
Skull_Lv6Skull_

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Immortali
ImmortaliLv6Immortali

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Alucard_PN9
Alucard_PN9Lv4Alucard_PN9

Are you going to merge "Rise of the Demon God" and "Awakening of the Ancient" at the end of your novel ? πŸ˜„πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”πŸ€”

Ryheem_Russell
Ryheem_RussellLv6Ryheem_Russell

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Daoist513202
Daoist513202Lv4Daoist513202

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darkprofecy
darkprofecyLv4darkprofecy

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Demonic_angel
Demonic_angelAuthorDemonic_angel

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Terahan
TerahanLv2Terahan

An amazing story full of interesting characters, events and the odd unexpected twist. The world world building is imaginative and quite detailed with just enough left unsaid to allow your imagination to both fill in the gaps in just the way your mind needs to make it one solid whole. 5 🌟 all the way!