Ashes & Fiends

A short excerpt I wrote a while back for a potential story. Here an unnamed protagonist is narrating the moment of madness as his master is being taken for being a witch. (Let me know if you'd be interested in reading this as a complete story.) Any constructive feedback is both appreciated and encouraged! Please feel free to point out any grammatical mistakes and odd writing to me. All my work is subject to change as I continue to improve with time.)