Reviews of Ascension or journey from world to world

Good Strory overall....however there are few things that bother me... 1.MC turning into a "Gotta Catch 'Em All!" harem protagonist that only thinks with his "lower extremities" now that does not mean that type protagonist bothers me but this had lot more potential than that... 2.At the start where God tells him about some dragons having millions of wives just give birth to an heir..that will become more powerful than he is...that made it sound like the protagonist is nothing more than a glorified sperm donor waiting to sire the true Protagonist...after that idea got stuck in my head...my interest towards the MC kinda went away.... 3.MC is supposed to be op and all but why does it come across as if the wives are somehow stronger than he is? After all it is HIS blood that gave them power...so does everyone that receives that boost become as strong as he is? And since their dragons who by instinct measure things by power then how is he still the "leader"? Other than the 3 reason above...keep up the good work!

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a jewel your story, is the second story of multiverses, with good arguments, I hope you finish it, if you read my comment, I wonder if it will also go to the worlds of: (nanatsu no Tazai) (Shinma Mao no testament), of course later of the worlds you plan to go.

this **** is boring, the MC just goes to every world and saves the characters, and he gives them his blood like nothing, in the future, he is probably going to give ability to every character in the world. **** this ****. feels like the MC is a servent going to every world to help each character and give them power. .......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

I figured it was rude not to review your novel after you reviewed mine. This is wonderful fic that feels like a breath of fresh air. The Mc is OP but not arrogant or attention seeking. He has a lot of woman but he treats them right. The journey through worlds is fun and i really enjoyed the way you handled each world. Your a great writer. Some of your ideas inspired me to write my own fanfic. Thank you for writing this story and i hope you have as much fun writing each chapter as you did when you wrote the first one.

There's no point reading this. The plot is freaking boring and author only knows how to save and let mc show off. There's nothing new at all

I'll be honest okay, the book is good it has a lot of good ideas and all. However, the writing quality is so bad that I can't continue. I take it that the author is translating this with Google or something, but holy **** is it bad, headmaster was turned into like ten different words like headman and Mr. Header, dafuq. Sorry about the rant about the quality. Onto the main character development, he was stated to be a super friendly guy who even saved a woman and a child before he died. Now he is a stone cold harem bastard, I don't think I can sigh harder, harem is fine but he has no personality, the romance is so forced I actually threw up (Then again I am sick) but the worst part is that the author doesn't seem to actually understand the lore of Harry Potter. I'll admit I haven't read the overlord parts or anything past it yet, but until the author uses something better than Google translate or gets a translator I will not continue reading. Now I'll repeat one thing, I love the way the book is going, it has potential. But I can hardly understand what's happening.

I was enjoying it finished harry potter arc and was excited for overlord arc but dropped it during overlord arc cause i realized MC was treating girls like pokemon and is trying to catch them all

Great novel please dont drop and keep going no matter what others say you doing a great jod here😊😍😁😁😁😁👊😁👊😁👊😁👊😁👊😊😁👊😍😊😍👊😁😊

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I was quite enjoying it up until the end of the third chapter. Then it seemed that a completely new writer took over. The grammer quality dropped significantly, the complrtely wrong terms were being used such as faculty for house at hogwarts etc. Really ruined the enjoyment of the novel.

The Fuckin MC Has A **** ton load of harem He's like a fuckin prostitute a fuckin sperm donor. The story revolves in him getting all the girls in every world he comes what an unrealistic mc common the elves he save that just becomes his women because he saves them the story at is kinda nahhhh and then the story revolves around women its crap!!!!

One of the best multiverse story i have ever read. The Mc doesn't go abandoning his women in different worlds like most mc's do. That's a +1 point for this novel. The Mc isn't stupid and has clear thinking. As for what one of the comments say about the Mc being "gotta catch them all" there's a specific reason for that(Told in the early chapter). So all in all keep up the good work author. I would want this novel to continue with constant updates for long and get a high ranking. Good luck and read this.

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A few problems with vocabulary. The bad parts are the all knowing super capable sage IA, degrading the value of potions and potions ingredients, turning wizarding alchemy into xianxia alchemy.

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NEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE AND HOPE THAT THE AUTHOR WILL NOT DROP THIS FAN FIC AND WILL CONTINUE WRITING IT 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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