Ascension: Online

so far loving the book as i did with primordial. keep it up! Story flows smooth to me, background is good. I hope the MC is ruthless tbh. Looking forward to his progress.

Your style is really inspiring. The way story is started seems interesting and unique from others. It's sad to hear about his parent's death as this factor will affect his life. Really interesting concept.

This story seems a good one to read while you wanted to feel angry and also feel the happiness that the MC will get his revenge. A lot of stories has bullies in today world, but these do not have the things this story has, others are having bullies who are doing much worse things than this one to the MC. And this story also got Stable updates, good story development, and good characters who seems likeable.

Already in love with the book so much, as it's dragging me out of my reality, Can't wait to read it further about what happens next!!! Auther-Nim keep goinggg!! Fighting!!!!

i've seen the other novels of this author, and i know that they tend to be pretty high quality, and it seems like this one will be too, especially since i love the MMORPG kind of novels

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One of the best books I've read here... The writing quality is INCREDIBLE! I was amazed by the vocabulary of the writer. I didn't find any grammatical errors as well. For me, it was flawless. The way the story is narrated makes this a page-turner. The world background is creative. I was already hooked when I read the class descriptions. [img=recommend] I'm a fan of cultivation novels. It was definitely a good pick for me. Keep up the good work author! I wish you the best of luck!

Amazing quality with the writing, the intro immediately grabbed my attention. The plot sounds really enticing too. Overall, really cool story and can't wait to see what comes next.

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Y'know I already have an inkling what's gonna happen here, even after just reading the first chapter. Not blood-related siblings have been the craze lately, so on the romance front, this sounds fun lol Other than that, I just had a slight problem with word repetition, especially names, but that's not a major problem. Pretty good, over-all.

It's actually really refreshing to read a story in first person. Many on this site are usually in 3rd person so it's a nice change. The story in itself has a an interesting concept which it executes really well. However I find that it shines with its comedic elements. As in the beginning where the main character says something along the lines of "it was a sunny day, just kidding no it wasn't". I was expecting the cliche start of a story but it caught me off guard. Well done author. It seems to be getting updated daily so I have hope that it won't be dropped half way through the story. The writing quality and the development as rather well done as well. Would definitely recommend anyone and everyone to read this. Anyone hovering over this novel and looking at the comments, if you're reading this, just go read the book already :) Well done author, keep it up!

The writing quality is very good, it paints a visual to the readers. I've noticed it updates daily with new chapters. The story itself is interesting, and I like where it's trying to go, but it's really early to say for sure if its 5 star. But the amount of chapters so far it shows the story is progressing at a good pace. Character design is good, how it describes the characters paints an image of how they look like in people's minds. The world background is interesting. The whole concept of trying to break out of an old life for a better one in another world is interesting to me.

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It's an interesting book so far. As I'm not someone well versed with gaming as well as the goings of such a world, there's not much I can say. Just keep writing and enjoying yourself.

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This is amazing! Following Kaze through his struggles and becoming a hero in this well written, amazingly created world and everything it has to offer. Incredible. Wonderful. Fun.

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Amazing novel, great chapter update consistency and I love the plot. Coming from your other book, The Mage Of Primordial Chaos, this is exactly what I needed. Looking forward to reading more.

Classic Game lit system story and the best part about the story is the game itself. It is very intriguing. The writing is awesome, lucid and flows well. The story pacing is pretty good, and I have shared my feedback with the author about story development in the chapter comment. When the game starts, it is worth the wait. The world building is done beautifully, both in the premise of the game and inside the game itself. The MC is very likeable, boy next door, easy to connect with. The great thing is despite this being a first person, the author doesn't have any unnecessary internal monologues which can be super annoying. Expositions are done expertly. Great work, author. I will keep it in my library simply because I wanna take notes, as a fellow system writer, lol. Please keep writing. <3

I've read only a few chapters. The first chapter really got me hooked. I haven't tried many novels based on games and all. But, this seems pretty interesting. I'm not a fan of the first-person perspective yet this one got me hooked by the way the protagonist told his story. Gonna read more!!!