13 Training my ass off! 2
(Hello! Author-san here :0
would you guys mind dropping a review on what you think of the story please. No one really drops many and I've been getting a quite a few hate comments and dead reviews about my story and I'm not sure if yall even like reading it or not, bar from the few that have which are positive, some negative. Don't get my wrong I love writing but its a little disheartening to see a lot of hate comments so I'm thinking of dropping. So could ya spend a miniscule amount of time telling me what you think and if I should carry on publishing. Thanks! )
Just read another review that thought this was trash, probs going to drop because i cba lol. Sadge
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Arthur POV
I was currently thinking about what I should do while I wait for my HP and mana to regen.
'Yeah, I better add my stat points to be ready for the boss of this God-forsaken dungeon. Hopefully its not too hard...Then again, harder challenge equals better rewards!' I thought to myself excitedly. 'Nabe, be a dear and bring up my status please'
[Status]
Level: 14 (progress to next lvl:32%)
Name: Arthur Liones
Race: High human
Titles: Shadow monarch (locked)
Zombie slayer!
Bloodline:
Health points: 4300/4300
Mana points: 3226/5700
Strength:74 (was 45)
Defence:70(was 40)
Agility:70 (was 45)
Intelligence: 55 (was 30)
Luck: 5 (maxed at 10)
Points available: 0 (was 108)
Sacred gear: Boosted gear (second liberation)
Skills:
Observation: can look at information of a living being or inanimate object. [lvl:11]
High human: boosts stats and xp earned by x2
Pyromancy: natural user of fire. The harder you train, the hotter the flame! Great potential in everything fire. (Immune to fires weaker than yours [lvl:14]
Mana shot: fire a charged shot of mana// 30 mana per shot [lvl:12]
Reinforcement: push mana throughout your body parts to increase defense stat// 80 mana per minute (currently increases defense by 8) [lvl:9]
Mana barrier: creates barrier with mana// depends on how much mana is charged into it//base mana use: 50 per 15 seconds [lvl:3]
Power of destruction: power of the underworlds Bael family. Can reduced objects and people to nothing!// mana can be charged to increase damage// base shot: 100 mana [lvl:8] (specific skills not yet know!)
Create dungeon- can create a dungeon based on level to earn XP// no mana cost
Escape dungeon- can leave a created dungeon (not during boss fights)// no mana cost
Shadow strike- Can preform a quick strike against opponent. Move is unnoticeable. Uses 75 mana [Lvl:11]
{Shadow monarch skill set} 5%
Arise- can revive dead targets within 3 attempts (current 15/ 5 extra stored in shadow)- will drain mana if shadows die.
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I looked over my new stats with a wide smile on my face. 'hahaha! This growth is fucked! I've been here an hour or two and I got 108 stat points, though I suppose my new skill helps with that! I can also see some of the mana consumption on skills has gone down, though to be fair I was thinking of finding a way to get infinite mana, its troublesome to know if I overuse it I could pass out mid fight.' I thought to myself, suddenly concerned at the thought.
I carried on looking through my status and made it to the shadow monarch skills! 'Oh shit, I forgot to use arise on some of the mutated zombies! Ah fuck it, I'll have to use it next fight.' I thought to myself, contemplating on what I could use it on.
I carried on waiting for a while until I had noticed my mana bar had fully risen. "Hey Nabe! Your welcome to go back to the house or come with me, its up to you, I don't mind, but I'm heading off again now my mana has refilled" I said to the maid standing next to me with a smile on my face. She looked back at me with a smile before saying "I will go back to the mansion Arthur, please do tell me if you need anything" After completing her sentence, she kissed me on the cheek and vanished.
'Hm. I could do with a teleporting skill, it would come in handy quite often' I thought to myself after seeing Nabe suddenly vanish from her position.
I left the abandoned house and walked past the broken down white picket fence out front. 'surely a gun would come in handy here. Would be decently easy to kill the zombies'. My thought were interrupted by my system giving me a quest.
[New quest!
Kill the boss of the dungeon!
Rewards: 5000xp//new skill
Failure: Death// you are mocked in hell for all of eternity ]
After the quest appeared I noticed a flashing light at the end of the road in the shape of an arrow. 'Is this leading me to where the boss of the dungeon is? Well that makes things a lot easier for me! I wonder what the boss is going to be? Probably some zombie king or something haha' I thought happily whilst preparing myself for battle.
I followed the illuminated arrows and found myself at a decontamination area. 'Well fuck me. Would it even be possible for me to come to somewhere worse than this? Ah never-mind, ill put an end to these mongrels soon enough.' i said to myself with a sigh.
3rd person POV
Arthur made his way into the decontamination area. He passed through barrier after barrier, of which was placed by the military to stop people getting in, only to find an open field covered with a magical circle and a boy, looking to be at the age of 16; though something told Arthur just from looking at the kid he wasn't what his looks suggested, sitting in the middle of it.
"HEHEHE! Have you come to witness my power? I'll put you down, like I did the others! Come forth my minions and show this man true darkness!" that boy said, Arthur decided to do a quick observe on him and check his power.
'observe'
[Necromancer
Age:162
Title- Shota man
Dungeon boss
HP- 2000
Mana-5600
Strength- 14
Defense-12// 100 with current shield
Agility- 19
Skills-
Necromancer- Brings the dead back to life
Breath of the dead- releases poisonous gas that reduces HP by the second
Chain Lightning- ability to throw lightning that hits other near target.
'Hoh, the kids strong! Quite strong in fact!' Arthur thought to himself in amusement. 'I'm definitely becoming a battle maniac...Eh fuck it, its fun!' he had officially declared to myself.
"Ddraig!" Arthur shouted to the dragon in him with excitement. "Partner!" she said with equal enthusiasm. "Its time to put a mongrel down! You with me!?" he asked the red dragon empress and she replied quickly while summon the boosted gear on my arm. "lets fuck this little shit up! Show him our power!"
"BOOSTO" the sacred gear sounded. Arthur visibly reacted to the influx in power his body formed. He shook with excitement as a manic grin formed on his face. Slowly a horrifying red aura formed around his body, evaporating all particles near his body! He had formed the PoD around his body!
"Come misleading boy! I'll show you your place beneath my foot! And after I'm done, I'll remove you from the plane of existence!" Arthur said to the boy. The boys reanimated zombies made there way over to Arthur, though he gazed at them with a disinterested look as he swarmed his hands in destruction and clasped there throats till they disintegrated from his aura.
The boy used his skill, 'the breath of the dead', and yet it didn't affect Arthur, the destruction around his body overwhelmed the meager skill and evaporated it from the air. "You thought that skill would be enough to do anything to me" Arthur suddenly disappeared from the boys vision until he was directly in front of him with his fist reared back.
*BOOSTO* the sacred gear sounded once again.
*CRACK*
The boys shield dropped as soon as Arthur's fist hit him! The necromancer was now laying on the floor, with Arthurs foot pushing his face into the dirt. "I told you I'd show you your place below my feet" Though a grin formed on the necromancers face after Arthur finished his sentence. This unnerved Arthur.
*Thud*
[-300 HP]
Arthur had suddenly felt a large force of power knock him onto his knee after being hit in the face. The boy shot away as soon as the foot was disconnected from his face. Arthur looked up once again to find a large zombie, with the physique of a rotting bodybuilder.
"All that, for a drop of blood" Arthur looked towards the boy to say.
Arthur also quickly moved away from the towering zombie and observed it.
'Observe'
[The perfect zombie
HP- 4000
Mana- 5
Strength- 30
Defense-34
Agility-6
'Hm, so its the tanky type I guess. Going to be annoying but its nothing I cant handle!' Arthur thought confidently.
*BOOSTO*
*EXPLOSION*
When Arthur felt the massively explosive power radiate from his body, he instantly charged to the jogging Zombie heading towards him. When they both closed the gap between them, while the zombie reared back its fist, Arthur grinned and disappeared from its view after using shadow strike, quickly re-appearing behind it with his wakizashi in hand. Arthur slashed downwards towards the zombies neck 'hahah! this is it for you!'
*CLSSSHHHT*
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"Huh?" Arthur said staring gob-smacked at the zombie, an innocent questioning look on his face. The zombie recovering, leaned back up with a wakizashi hanging from its neck. "AHAHAH you cant beat my finest creation so easily child" the boy necromancer said whilst observing the fight.
*DOOF*
Arthur flew to the floor as the zombie kicked his side.
[-400HP]
[Arthur Health points: 3651/4300]
All things fell silent on the battlefield, the necromancer closing in on Arthur, hoping to deal the finishing blow. At least that was what he was hoping on doing, until..."haha...ha...HAHAH.....HAHAHAHAHAHA"
Arthur POV
[New passive skill unlocked:
Heat of the moment- in the midst of battle, all stats will be doubled for one minute when activated]
"haha...ha...HAHAH.....HAHAHAHAHAHA" I knew I was laughing like a madman, but I truly couldn't care less at that moment. With Ddraig's explosion still lingering, the power inside of me exploded and then once again only to be paired with.
*BOOSTO*
I stood up with the destruction aura surrounding me, carving away at the floor and everything else within a 5m radius of me. The tanky zombie once again charged, preparing to tackle me to the floor, only to disappear as it dived into me, fading away as it got closer until only half its body remained.
"All I see is red. You don't have long left on this plane necromancer. Say your goodbyes and pray that Rob has mercy on your soul. Because I most certainly will not" I said with a calm voice towards the necromancer boy.
In the blink of an eye, I appeared face to face with the boy, his shield fading away under the pressure of my aura. "The worry on your face entertains me. A shame I wont see it for long" I said before planting my palm over his face and releasing my PoD. He died in an instant and his body shriveled to that of an old man.
*RESET*
"Fuck..." i said to no-one. The power instantly faded from me. 'oh...Wow...I'm in pain. Yep. I'm in a lot of pain' I said to myself, silently screaming as I collapsed on the ground and laid there. The magic circle the old man/boy was producing already fading away.
After a few moments of getting my bearings, i got the half body of the zombie and the necromancer and put them together. I focused on the tanky zombie and said
"Arise" His body was qucikly engulfed in a dark shadow as my system confirmed what I had already guessed.
{Shadow extraction complete. Give it a name}
"Hmm, I'll name you...Tank! Yeah. That's a good name" I said towards my new soldier. It nodded in confirmation. I once again looked to the old mans body.
"Arise" i said to the body.
{shadow extraction failed. 2 more try's}
"Arise" I said again, but with a more commanding voice.
{shadow extraction failed. 1 more try}
'This fucking dick' I thought as I grew angry.
"Come forth and serve me! ARISE!" I practically shouted. Though it wasn't in vane, as I noticed the shadow engulf the body before it rose with a bow motion.
{Shadow extraction complete. Give it a name}
"Your name will be... Necro" i said to the newest addition. It bowed once again.
[Multiple quests completed. Do you wish to accept the rewards?]
'Yes please Nabe, accept them' I said with a kind voice.
[Dungeon closing. You will be placed in previous position]
My soldiers went into my shadow and my vision faded.
