Reviews of Arthur Liones in Highschool Dxd!
Arthur Liones in Highschool Dxd!
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I’m writing this bc i disagree with most review written so far. grammar is very good , update stability and story development have been awesome aswell only downsides i would say is the mc’s “cringe” and edgy moments that some people may find anoying(only at the beggining of the story) and the amount of swearing. I would definetely recommend giving this ff a chance.
History is a pleasant pastime. The work of a budding author who starts writing for pure pleasure. Certainly not a work that will enter the best sellers of this millennium, but certainly not a work that people should criticize in an offensive and thinking way, especially if they leave only words without indicating a problem. In my opinion there are problems with too many swearing in sentences, a character with a strong ego or even too many POV changes ... but definitely nothing that deserves contempt or words like garbage. If you don't like the story you just have not to read it, if you see the potential you can instead indicate where in your opinion the author could improve. The stories are based on the wishes of the author and the taste of the reader. Continue with your author work
***Review AS of chapter 30 spoilers*** MC gets cockblocked a Lot. Well atleast His Relations make some Progress. MC currently is trying to seduce Serafall. Next on the list are Rias, Sona, Koneko, Kuroka, Asia, Ophis, Grayfia, Tiamat, Ddraigg, Gabriel, and Well... a Bunch of Girls. Thanks for the hard Work so far author also have an Irina Amen.
I am impressed with the other readers that have read this fanfic. cause personally I can't stomach it. I didn't even read the chapters in one go I had to read it bit by bit with intervals. don't get me wrong it has potential. it's just not for me. the MC just comes as a try hard blowhard poser to me. the story is also super cliche that made me cringe several times. I recommend that others read it for themselves and judge wether they like it cause it's not for me.
Bro don't mind the haters and people leaving bad reviews and comments the only reason why they do that is their inability to write their own story so they take it out on others. If they think the story is bad just tell them to f off and not read it if it's thag bad. Like at this point they are just maliciously doing this out of jealousy.
I like the story. The story that the author tells uses and combines many concepts that have been done before, in some cases even better than here, but the combination of them and the ability of the author too put a smile on my face is quite refreshing. So I would recommend this story to everyone who is looking for a enjoyable read.
First off, I quite enjoy this story and wished it updated more frequently. That said, I highly recommend it, especially since it is one of the few non-Rias-bashing fan fics on the sight. Personally, the intro chapters were a huge turn-off and almost made me drop the story and I think most people could do with out it. They don’t add much to the understanding of the mc, though recently we have seen a but more of his temper resurface. Aside from that, the interactions with the characters are generally fun and entertaining. I was and still am sceptical about the ultra overpowered MC from the start since that lack of growth tends to leave gaps in stories and often leaves authors burned out constantly pushing the plot. Overall, a nice read and a good new DxD fanfic.
I'mma rate this based on my own preference. The story is okay. I just have slight grudge against the MC himself. Just like an ice mint flavoured ice cream, you will either like or hate the MC for his guts. Don't get me wrong, I neither hate nor like the MC, he simply doesn't suit my taste. He's too edgy for my own taste. Though, I AM certain that anyone would behave that way — albeit not as much as him — when they experienced what the MC had experienced. All in all, it's a good story to read when you have nothing to read. It's light, and you can sense the comedy in almost every MC's moves. Keep writing! Don't write for reviews, write for fun and self-improvement!
Well, I won't bore you with the details, I love the story and I hope you continue writing. I wouldn't say that I like a lot the MC cause I never really liked young masters haha but with your writing quaility and the idea behind the fanfic, it is more than enough for me to skip this minor detail. I only hoped there were more chapters haha. Thanks for writing this fanfic you're doing a great job!
