“In the end, we only regret the chances we didn't take...” 28-year-old Arthur Mondragon lived a satisfying life. He had a happy family and a promising career ahead of him. However, everything began to fall apart when the love of his life announced her engagement to a different man. A few months after her wedding, the girl tragedically died at the hands of her husband. Heartbroken and filled with regret, Arthur made poor decisions one after another, resulting in his untimely death. When he woke up, he found himself in the magical world of Cleo. ‘Arthur and the Mystery of Reincarnation’ follows Arthur as he ventures through the world of Cleo, trying to understand the mystery behind his reincarnation. However, the road will not be easy as he tumbles through turbulent events in Cleo, over and over again. |------------| Update Schedule: Saturdays, Sundays, Tuesdays, and Thursdays. Additional Chapters may be uploaded on Wednesdays. |------------| Links: Twitter: https://twitter.com/PaulLibretto Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/thebooksofpaul/ Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/PaulLibretto
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A boy who was living an ordinary life in another world suddenly came to the present world. Social systems, way of life and morals... They have all changed. How will the boy try to survive? What kind of life will the boy live?
Orphaned in a world where the people gain classes through the drawing of a lottery, Draig a Vampire born amidst mortals must face the world and struggle with his Vampire heritage along with a odd System that was matched with him. All the while trying to survive against those who persecute his monster Heritage.
Reed, a young man that had spent his entire life in the slums wished for a miracle. He dreamt that one day he'd escape the ghetto he had been born in and travel across the world. He longed to embark on an adventure and truly begin living a real life. Alas, it was not meant to be. The stars had other plans in mind for the young man. On the night of his sixteenth birthday, he had his life flipped upside down. Caught in the midst of a confrontation between two rival gangs, Reed suffered a fatal injury. As he laid on the street, Reed couldn't help but laugh at how unfair his life had been from beginning to end. Born poor? Sure. No parents? Okay. No opportunities in life? Fine. But his own miserable life, too? "What more can I be deprived of?" Reed muttered as he struggled to keep his eyes open. A soft voice chuckled and said, "Much, much more, boy. But you'll soon have the opportunity to have all your wishes fulfilled." "...If you can earn the right to obtain them." --------------------------------------------- Let this message serve as a FINAL warning to those who have come in expecting the 'usual' type of story on this site. This is 'NOT' a wish-fulfillment based story. Please do NOT come into this novel with the expectation that you will get some kind of fearless action hero. The MC is everything but that. That he will be... this 'fearless, intrepid' person straight out of the FIRST chapter. A bold, charismatic hero with an unshakable resolve and iron will. Get that irritating preconception out of your head right now if you dare venture further into the story. I KNOW that's what you're expecting because that's the common setup with the stories on this site. I am writing a story about personal growth, above all else. Be forewarned about that. I'm serious. That means that the character has to start from the bottom and work his way UP. Not in only in terms of power, but also in the strength of his character -- as in, maturing INTO someone who will become a hero. Not over the course of a SINGLE chapter like some stories do. Not in SINGLE arc, or volume, but over the course of the ENTIRE STORY. My main character starts off as COWARDLY, INDECISIVE, and WHINY. He is by NO measure a heroic person, or EVEN a whole person. He is weak-willed and flawed because that is how I HAVE WRITTEN him to be, for good reason. Now, it's your right to DISLIKE this decision I've made and not read the novel because of that. Absolutely. If you want an OP power-fantasy, then go find it elsewhere on the site. You do you. Don't let me or anyone stop you from reading what you want. But if you read my novel for what it is and then give it a poor review, criticizing it for having a "flawed, detestable, and pathetic main character," I WILL delete your goddamned review on that point alone. tl;dr: My main character isn't fucking He-Man and the Terminator's baby. He's a human being with all the ugly, pathetic parts you don't like seeing in your OP Reincarnation novels. ------------------------------------------------- Any comment or review you'd leave for the novel is worth more than gold to me. Have a good one.
This is a work of fiction, any names, characters, stories or events, are fictitious! (Even the country in the story is just the author's fantasy as the author never visited those countries in the story) Armipotent is an archaic adjective meaning "strong in battle." Basically, it refers to someone who is physically tough in war. Originally, it was used to refer to the Roman god of war, Mars. ===================== Tang Shaoyang, an orphan who dropped out of the middle school to fight on the street as he found out school was useless for a penniless orphan like him. Tang Shaoyang dropped out of his school, fighting on the street, and made a name for himself. Berserker Tang from Youyouliucun. Afterward, Dragon Wing triad recruited him and everything was good for him. Even though the public deemed him as a tumor of society, Tang Shaoyang was having a decent life. Until one day, everything changed as an absurd and strange game started. "... Game starts! Stage one: Survival for The Fittest!" After the game started, zombies appeared out of nowhere. ... Ding! "You have killed 1000 zombies less than 24 hours since the game started! You gained 3 Talents!" Dong! "You may choose 3 Talents! please choose carefully!" Tang Shaoyang held his chin and mused what Talent he had to choose. "With Zombies appear everywhere, I need an infinite strength... this is one, I still need to choose 2 Talents more..." Then a lewd smile formed on his lips. "I want an infinite strength, charm and charisma to conquer women, and the last one, I want to upgrade my **** so I can please my women!" After saying this, Tang Shaoyang laughed aloud. "Hahaha, there's no way such talent exists... ehhhhh?!!!" Ding! Dong! "3 Talents are consumed! You have been granted Divine Body! Good Luck, Gamer Tang Shaoyang!" Tang Shaoyang immediately checked the detail of Divine Body. After a brief silence, he muttered unbelievably. "Such Talents really exist..." Note: I don't own the cover. If the creator wants me to take down the cover or put credit, please notify me by replying to my review at the Review section.
Death is not the end. But actions do have consequences and based on how you lived your life, second chances are possible. I was given a second chance. I could choose how to reincarnate, who to be, and what Universal constants would impact my next life. Who wouldn't try to game the system and take all the advantages possible? And when I learned that creatures of mythology, the ancient Gods; Olympians, Asgardians, Sidhe, lived and ruled, how could I resist? This is a slice of life type novel that deals with RPG elements including System, Leveling, Politics, Transmigration, and Killing. Know that the Main Character may experience setbacks and 'nerfs' as part of the narrative. An MC that always wins is boring! Thanks for reading. And if you'd like to help support my efforts and increase the release rate, donations are always welcome! This work is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-NoDerivatives 4.0 International License. Patreon at https://www.patreon.com/user?u=5104613 Or Paypal at https://www.paypal.com/donate/?token=c0vj8S6E3VksUhmz03Kzp7nLK1knGY-PjD7rNgkoRbCwHI5xZ8qd0XkPldKn4M0kQGOiPW&fromUL=true&country.x=US&locale.x=en_US
After an unknown amount of time, a soul got to reincarnate into a fantasy realm with it’s own choice of abilities and looks. Watch as he goes through a life as powerful as can be in this world. This is a hobby and not professional work so please bare with me while I try my best to make this book a good one. I would also like to put out here this is my first novel and a learning experience for me, I’m sorry if the tags aren’t right or to disappoint. Original work by SimpleFool.
Sora, a guy who was reading up on "That Time I was Reincarnated as a Slime", had not been paying attention when he got struck by a moving truck. He was taking his final breaths and he said to himself "wouldn't it be cool if I was in one of those isekai things? I mean, I just got hit by a truck. I would love to have some cool powers and be able to live how I wanted to live. I guess dragons are pretty cool and they can do whatever they want, but it would kinda suck to be a slime though". After everything went black, he thought it was strange since he could move around, except he was trapped in a circular object. "Why can't I get out? Why do I feel lighter? and why do I have claws as hands!"
Reincarnated as Zeus, he rules over the Olympians and prepares them for a fight against an unknown enemy.
Merlin, the strongest human elementalists remaining, is fighting the otherworldly zombie monarch; Zero, along with the rest of the handful survivors of the human race. However, Zero suddenly grins and unleashes a truly terrifying attack wiping out everything. However, when Merlin opens his eyes, he is alive, and back to the time just before it all started. Before Zero, before the zombies, before the apocalypse. Now he must move forward in order to protect those he couldn't before, and change the fate that awaits Earth.
My name is Alex Wolf. After school I joined the military a mistake I will never regret. It got me killed. Now you might, 'How can this idiot not regret this", well the answer is easy, I got a second chance or more like chances. I met with a God, that's right "a" not "the", and made a deal with him. I will go to four different worlds and make four legends and in return, he would grant 3 wishes and a free reincarnation pass into any world of my choosing. The first life I was a human named Lambert. My legacy of being a Grand paladin that slew the seven princes of hell was told even after thousands of years. The second life was the longest I was an immortal Giant or more precisely a Titan. I created a legend of myself just by standing in one spot for a million years. People truly have great imaginations for thinking I was a statue, thou anything turns to stone after so long. In the end, I killed myself for not even the gods of that world dared approach me. The third and I might say weirdest life of them all I was an elf. I help slay a Demon King with a hero, it's also what got me killed. The hero was actually summoned from Japan in my old world so it was kinda strange. The fourth life was the most fun I must say. I was born as a fucking Dragon. During my life, I burned kingdoms to the ground and was a scourge upon the world. I finally died of old age after a hundred thousand years of tormenting that world. Now finally after four lives and millions of years, I can finally live free again. .................................................................................. Ok for reverence sake this is a DXD fanfic. I don't own any of the characters except the MC of course and the Picture isn't mine if the owner wants me to take it down be free to tell me.
Another classroom teleported into another world with a bord protagonist, who's a little self-aware that he's in some kind of cliche story. View the world in Hiroto's eyes, a 16-year-old who's a big fan of anime, manga and videogames. Slowly Hiroto will see the world in a darker light. Cover Credit: Arion's card from Rage of Bahamut
18 years old Yi Kang-Ho's life was perfect until he was sucked into a portal which transported to a Hell like world. In this world he had fight creatures, monsters, demons. He risked his life for 400 years and one faithful day he managed to somehow escape the Hell and came back to earth but even after spending 400 years there only 2 years had gone by on Earth. Earth was totally different from before dungeons appeared everywhere, Hunters became the new government of the new world and the world became dog eat dog world. Follow the journey of Kang-Ho in this new world filled with adventures. Release time: 18:30 UTC 7 ch/week +1 bonus chapter/week if 25 Patreon supporter. ……………………………………………………………………………………………… Support author- Patreon.com/Rish_madara https://paypal.me/rishabbiswas24 Get to read unreleased chapters by supporting me on Patreon https://discord.gg/5DaxsJG also you can join our discord for disscussion over the novel ------------------------------------------------------------------- The cover does not belong to me the credit goes to creator if creator wants me to remove it please contact me.
It was the year 2023 on Earth, on the afternoon of a normal day, the Earth was suddenly enveloped by an unknown light that mysteriously transferred the human population into another world. This story begins with a pitiful boy who was reluctantly forced into accepting his family's martial inheritance after his siblings turned it down. Who would have thought that this very inheritance would be extremely useful in the world he would be transported to. Separated from his family, he was thrown into a forest of an unknown world alongside his friend and pet, Silver. This is the story about the adventures of the boy, Cecil, and his pet wolf, Silver, in the world of Alterna. ****** Release Rate: 1 chapter daily! Support me on Patreon for more chapter releases and to get early access to advanced chapters! https://www.patreon.com/xxAlter If you'd like to buy me a coffee here's the link: ko-fi.com/xxalter Join the Novel's Discord! https://discord.gg/PKcGkP8 I don't own the cover art! My friend only recommended it and I have no idea who the original creator is! If the original creator of the art wants me to take it down, please notify me!
A teacher dies and goes back in time. With his pre learned knowledge, he decides that he no longer needs to study and gives the newest high tech virtual reality game a try. He becomes a swordsman but his thirst for reading carries onto his in game life? How far will he go, and what will happen in his daily life? Will he tell the world who he is? Or will he keep his identity as a secret? Discord: https://discord.gg/JqdGyDq
Hey I am well I was a 24 year old Man named Alexander Miles an aspiring musician and I woke up in 17 year old kids body in the hospital. I remember everything from the life I lived before or is it after ? Later ? Future? But I also have the memories of this current body Alexander Rose it’s like both their souls merged into one. Of course this only happened because he/I got hit by a truck saving a little girl 2 years prior at least that’s The last I can recall from his...my Memories. So my theory is his soul needed to merge with another to survive, because I remember dying then darkness, then there was a voice calling for someone to help them and then I wake up in a hospital in the past oh and somehow I have a system!- [Well This will be my first original (released) story I’ve had other ideas that I write but not sure if people would like them. Well anyway thank you if you’re reading this story and if you don’t continue thank you for reading anyway. Also those of you that want to know when I’ll release chapters right now I’ll update when I can]- (The cover picture isn’t mine but I really liked it but if the one who created it doesn’t want me to use it just tell me and I’ll remove it and try to find an actual cover)
The boy named Abium lived as a servant in the Lawbarth noble house until 16. One day on an escort, he and other servants were left behind as scapegoats, and by some luck, he survived. But chaos arrived in the whole Easica continent. Demons and Devils appeared from Abyss and Hell. Evil gods cult members slaughter everywhere. He survived till 40 years and died in the hand of Greater Demon Kolgath When he wakes up, he found himself traveled back in time. What choice would he make to change his future?
I was betrayed by my own brother. He killed me with his own hands and the next time I opened my eyes, all I wanted was revenge! Huh? Where is this place? And why do I have cat hands!? I'm reborn as a Cat!? P.S. • I will try to update 5 chapters per week. • I also want to say this is my first time writing so it might not be that good but I'll do my best to make it one. Hahahahahaha! • Join me at my Discord: https://discord.gg/8wPsv5b to further support me.
When ROB has no option other than gives me a system that works like Gacha or lottery that can only be used once in a month in a world where half of the universe can turn into dust with a snap. The first month, I got a Batarang, the second month I got a million-dollar, the third month I got a.......
Wouldn't you just want to possess superpowers in this modern world? What would you do if you suddenly come to possess superpowers? Would you want to play the hero? Or perhaps the villain? Or continue living your life, using your superpowers for your own personal gains and well-being, instead of planning evil acts, or trying to save the day? Well, that is the precise situation that Hayden Emperador, the main character of our story, is going to face.
Zhao Yao, an average web novelist, took control of the body of a humiliated and tortured clan member of the Ancient Zhao clan after he tried to commit suicide. A master of cultivation novels, Zhao Yao realized that his savior, a self-claimed Immortal, was the special cheat he got like other usual protagonists. Even though he was in a new world full of adventures ahead of him, Zhao Yao first had to solve and clear the shameful trap set up for him by his own family. With his Master plotter mind, he had to tackle all the troubles and drive his own story through his actions rather than his pen. It's going to be a lot of fun, or he hoped so. Zhao Yao swore to create an Epic story with his own life. ********** Immortal Lu ended his long closed-door cultivation in success only to get shocked by the time he took for his breakthrough. The land changed. It's people changed. The cultivation method changed. Almost every aspect of society felt new to him. He, who focused fully on his cultivation, decided to experience and learn the world when he met a fated 'friend' of his, Zhao Yao. ******** A master without social knowledge and a disciple without any cultivation knowledge formed a unique relationship that made others as well as themselves question who among them is the master. They started an adventure full of enjoyment, face slapping, and self-learning. ********** [This story is not BL. Just a novel with a unique Master-Disciple relationship.] ********** [I don't own the picture..]
"Argh, how did my life end up like this?!" There was once a boy who's well-loved and popular with his peers. His smile could melt an adult's heart and his easygoing and sweet nature attracted a lot of girls who became his admirers. Little did he know that such a blessed life wouldn't last forever. Now, he is an ugly, overweight adult, working a job he doesn't like, and leading a life he doesn't want. No women want to be near him, let alone be his girlfriend, or even his wife. He is an oversized gear in a machine that doesn't even welcome him. When he gets fired from his job, it is the last straw from him. He remembers his life as a kid, and now good and beautiful it was. "I don't want this. I don't want this anymore!" "I would be better off dead than having to live like this for a second longer!" Suicidal, he passes by a flooding river, as there is a storm that day. He immediately thinks of throwing himself there, ending it once and for all. And he does. But not because he actually has the balls to kill himself via drowning, but because he sees a little girl being carried down the river by the strong current. In a split second, he decides that it would be better if she lives, even if he has to die in the process. And he does. He saves her, throwing her into the side of the river. But then his legs, rarely ever used, suddenly cramp. He can do nothing as he is swallowed by the waves. "Aah, it would be nice if I could be reincarnated into a fantasy world, like in those stories... I can do it all over, and do it better this time around..." His wish is granted. When he wakes up, he's no longer his old, adult self. He's a baby, living in an entirely new world. This is his story. ------ This story would have both happiness and hardships, heartwarming and sad moments, as well as romance that doesn't just end in a kiss. This is a harem story that will end up in a genuine polygamous relationship. It's also an adventure story, though it would stay as a slice-of-life for a good while as MC grows up.
I was clueless about the ways of the world, but I can supplement that with my ardent desire for knowledge. I was powerless, but I now wield powers no mortal can hope to comprehend. I was kind, but I learned ruthlessness is the only way to live in a world that wants my head. Generals, Kings, Emperors, and Gods are just some being who gained recognition but all of them like everyone else. I am a being no one wanted to exist, I am a scourge, but I will rise and be revered by all. And if they do not bend their knees? Their fates will be sealed underneath my feet. Kneel before the one who treads the Monstrous Path. =========================== I don't own the cover Also, this is not Harem and will have a lot of gore and violence more so than Celestial Peak Thanks for reading and please enjoy
With the combined knowledge and talents of a man from the modern world and an orphan with a mysterious past, Orison must face the challenges of a world that seems hauntingly familiar to a favorite video game yet dangerously different. Armed with determination and gifts from a questionable source, what other choice is worth making but to boldly advance when you're an orphan at the edge of the world. *Vol 1- Post Ancient Civilization High Fantasy *Vol 2- Magic Industrial Revolution High Fantasy *Vol 3- 1940's Alternate Earth Urban Fantasy/Horror
Lin Ke, a famous online artist, suddenly died one day from a rock that flew out of the sky. Having died and reborn into a new world, Lin Ke sets out on a journey to become the greatest artist he can, and in the process, make the world his canvas. (Sounds kinda boring but i promise its not. There will be fighting.) -Author
Gold tier award winning novel of WPC#130. Discord link : https://discord.gg/hKWHxp synopsis begins : The novel follows the story of Arnold, a porter, who accompanies warriors and superhumans inside dangerous dungeons, which are distinguished by their colors. The porters were always mistreated by the modern human civilization and even though their job was riskier than that of warriors and superhumans, their existence was never appreciated nor were they paid well. No one knows why these dungeons started to appear all over the world. The only thing they know was the dangers that would find their way into the world if they didn't kill the monsters. But only a selected few actually cared about the calamity, because for the rest it was all about earning money and gaining power. But nothing in this new world is constant and everything keeps changing, and this time the change would find its way towards an ordinary Porter. Follow me on the journey of the rise of this ordinary Porter to become the world's strongest. Cover art by : Jamin Lin (if anyone has any problems with it please let me know. All rights belong to the artist)
Ace was shocked to hear a voice inside his head when was dying in space. ( read the first chapter to find out how he ended up in space xD ) || " Hey, want to become Host of The Great Anti-Hero system who is going to make you The Greatest Hero? II " What !! you are an Anti-Hero system but you are going to make me ' The Greatest Hero? " But Ace our MC is not alone in his journey as there are many types of systems found by people in this Vast World full of secrets... There are shocking Secrets buried behind the Existence of Systems that appears in various universes and Multiverses....if you want to find out more, join the journey of Ace. ( i moved my previous synopsis into chapter 0 as it was quite big and created this new synopsis...Don't forget to read Chapter 0 as it is crucial )
A university student returned to his childhood without knowing how or why it even happened. If Truck-kun isn't the one who pulled strings here, then who? What will he do and how can his return affect the world he's in? Reincarnation + storage ring ( one mile space inside ) + a System. What more can he asked for?! === This story is mostly Slice of Life and will mostly focused on our MC's everyday life especially the Volume 1. The Cover photo wasn't mine. I just downloaded it from the internet. If you owned the photo and you don't like it to be here then please contact me so I can change it. Warning : Leon is a High Human and will become VERY OVERPOWERED when he grow up. C. R. O. S. S.]
Ruby Gardner, a fairy on the run, finds herself trapped in a vampire's castle. Ash Mayhew is mysterious and confusing but the two of them strike a deal where she helps him in exchange for keeping her safe for a little while. She never would have dreamed exactly how much that deal would entail...
This novel was moved to Fanfic section. With same name and book cover. It is not dropped. I always dreamed of battle and adventure for my life to be full of magic, science and the mysteries of the universe. . . . . Finally I get the chance to achieve this in the body of one of the most underrated and thought to be useless Superhero. . . . .Follow me as I take Marvel by storm and become a Supreme being using magic, science and a whole lot of Marvel bullshit. . . I Will become Ultimate Cypher. . . Marvel SI as one of the least powerful Superheroes. #wish fulfillment #Marvel #Spider #Magic #Bullshit Science https://discord.gg/zqRTp5
Feng Ye, a freshman one step away from finishing his first year of university, had the unfortunate experience of encountering a distortion in space, thus, sending him into the void. Due to a fortuitous encounter, he had acquired a system and had found himself in an interesting developed world comprised of individuals with the abilities of the supernatural. Feng Ye mutters as he looks at the huge influence he had created. "When I look back, I wonder.. since when did I become Mr. Nice guy?" Nearby, Akeno chuckles, “Ever since you had decided to establish the New Era Project and became the president of the New Era Society, you have been doomed to take on the Mr. Nice guy title.” With an eye roll, Feng Ye retorts, “Didn’t you know that nice guys finish last?” Follow Feng Ye's journey as he struggles to find his place in his world while finding his way home. The beginning of the New Era. Feng Ye’s Era. Discord: https://discordapp.com/invite/rdyPuhs
A young man, transported to another world, where after thousands of years of slumber, magic is budding once more. With the beginning of a new magic era, new wonders are there for him to discover. New magic, mixed with old, and with his own personal touch, it is growing stronger by the day. Ancient remnants and new battlefields, old races, and magic beasts, this world has it all! The thirst for knowledge and power is driving him forward to rediscover the wonders of magic! -------------- The story will continue for a long time, slowly revealing the wide world... -------------- If you would like to support this story and also get a few early chapters, I made a Patreon: https://www.patreon.com/GoldenShadow
Darkness never stops existing. Be it in this world or the next. Jack has experienced the worst in his previous world but it may be what saves him in the next. Jack Rojas spends his life serving corruption but during one particular mission, his life was taken. Meeting his end, he suddenly met his new life as the fourth child of a noble. Is this world better or worse than his previous one?
Hello! Paul here! I conceptualized "Arthur and the Mystery of Reincarnation" last year (2019) and began writing the story this year. It wasn't the first novel that I tried to write. Most of the names that I'll use in this novel came from several Detailed Novel Outlines that I made before. Yes, outlines. I love writing them. AMOR became my first 'true' attempt because I always spend too much time thinking about the world then I'd usually lost my drive to write after finishing the plans. AMOR, in that regard, wasn't any different. But I told myself that I wouldn't achieve anything if I don't start writing. So here I am, WRITING! Anyways, I hope you enjoy my story because I love writing this. Have a blast!
I'd say this is a great novel so far. The story premise is unique, for a novel in the isekai genre. The plot is very interesting, despite the story only spanning 33ish chapters at the moment, it's gotten me thoroughly invested in the story to come. The author is great at hinting at the mysteries both small and big, without shoving it in your face. The only part that brought down my rating was the upload schedule. I've come back and visited the pages for a few weeks and sadly haven't found anything. P.S. Dear author, you're doing great. I know numbers can be discouraging, but I know from experience that numbers get better with time, not always with quality. Whether or not you still want to write for this story, do what will make you happier, just know that I'm rooting for you. Though I don't want to get too sappy I hardly ever see projects with this much potential, to see one die before it's wings spread would be sad. Though this whole message is assuming numbers are the reason you may have stopped uploading. If they aren't, best wishes on your next project, starting something is intimidating but if this novel is anything to go off of, you got the stuff for it.
Overall it is very enjoyable to read! I always laugh at Arthur and his staff's interaction. I love the unique relationship between him and his grandmother too! This story is very fun to read and one of my favorites so far. It has a cool story too and there are many mysteries going on. Great work, author-san!
The book is a wonderful read. The story flows very well and the pacing that the MC Arthur develops is very good. I think the story really encapsulates the mind and curiosity of the MC, making character development one of the strong suits of this novel. The plot is interesting and flows smoothly. Well done, looking forward to the rest of the story!
Superb, this one. The erlier chapters may have some slight grammatical errors, probably just small oversights, but over time the quality of writing really shows improvement. The story's pacing is well done, with natural sounding dialogue and adequately described environments making the world come to life. Keep on writing👍You'll probably get contracted eventually.