Arpious of the Planes

I like it! Just please keep posting, no drop please.......................................................................................................

5 stars all the way your story is amazing just hope you keep posting ..........................................................................

I love this story very much please no drop Although I have a doubt, where is the mc supposed to get an heir to his kingdom? Well she can adopt and then pass his bloodline through a ritual or something like that or simply Letting herself be f*cked by a man she chooses, although it would be uncomfortable I sincerely hate bisexual (homosexual) mc's lol

The story is pretty interesting so far but the best part of it I would have to say is the kingdom building. It has a lot of room to improve since this is your first novel. In conclusion this novel is pretty good but you should also review your chapters in order to improve your writing.

it's a good book for the first 5 volumes it was very good, there are some mistakes in maintaining the status, but it's still good. the only flaw is that in the 6th volume the author started writing in the 3rd person and filling the chapters with descriptions that don't provide much usefulness to the way things go.

A good read so far... That's all I can say. It's been a while since a nice story caught my eye. So, let's see how it goes. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

It is good novel and i enjoy reading it, keep updating author.

When the war of the beasts brings about the world's end The goddess descends from the sky Wings of light and dark spread afar She guides us to bliss, her gift everlasting

My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely

My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely

My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface Quietly, but surely

My friend, do you fly away now? To a world that abhors you and I? All that awaits you is a somber morrow No matter where the winds may blow My friend, your desire Is the bringer of life, the gift of the goddess Even if the morrow is barren of promises Nothing shall forestall my return Act IV My friend, the fates are cruel There are no dreams, no honor remains The arrow has left the bow of the goddess My soul, corrupted by vengeance Hath endured torment, to find the end of the journey In my own salvation And your eternal slumber Legend shall speak Of sacrifice at world's end The wind sails over the water's surface

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I love this story and the only reason I stopped reading was because of all the chapters I had to re-get even though it was free the day before. But still its great.

I loved this novel, I'm reading all the time. The main reason I love these novels is that the protagonist is a monster and evolves by eating other beings.

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I relly like the characters and there there disigns and characters development and worldbuilding also the evolutions are realy dope the only problem i have so far is some minor level inconsistent from time to time and my personal opinion is the level up so slowly whitch i hate. 4/5

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I love this story so far! I wish you update more often but i told pancakes about your novel, saying gow it was inspired by epic of caterpillar and she was super happy about it! Everything is great with the novel, hopefully The mc starts crafting also or anything else instead of fighting Only (im only 24 chapters or so in)

I CAN'T HANDLE MC PERSONALITY SHE'S LIKE MY ANNOYING GIRLFRIEND THAT ALWAYS CHANGE MOOD EVERY MINUTES HAHAHAHAHAHA ANG ALSO WHY THE HECKK SYSTEM CONSIDER MC SETELMENT INTO KINGDOM WITH 100-POPULATION?? ANYWAY BYEE