HotIce
some clarification regarding Mc of this novel. if you're looking for smart or cunning, or jack all of trade MC, then this novel may not be for you. you can proceed with your search and leave this section. that's the warning now it's for the clarification. I have been reading a lot of complaints saying the mc is dumb or idiot. stop with your twisted logic guys, if someone is not smart it does not mean he's an idiot or dumb. I never created the MC to be smart, he just, a dude who never finished his middle-school and has been fighting on the street for almost half of his life. that's basically the mc's background, a street thug who talks by his fist. Drop your high expectation for him to be cunning or something else. does the mc will change in the future? yes, of course, there will be character development for him. He will change as the story goes on. My idea of the Main Character is not someone perfect in everything, but someone who is good at one thing and uses that thing to the top. I have even an idea to use a disabled as the Main Character. anyway, In this case, the Main Character is good at fighting and he will fight all the way to the top. that's it. if one day, I make a smart main character, he would never be strong, but he just uses his smart brain to solve everything which is extremely hard to create (at least for me, it's hard). That's it, while I am here, the chapter's length is around 1200-2000 words, so sometimes you will feel the chapter is long and sometimes short.
I’ve read into the book a little ways, and have one major concern. Does the author ever find a translator or anyone that actually speaks English to fix this? It’s a huge mess and difficult to read to the extreme. The book has potential from what I can tell, but I’m not wasting my time reading much more than the first few chapters if it’s going to be this much of a mess the whole time I’m trying to read it.
TO BE BLUNT THE AUTHOR IS STEALING FROM HIS READERS. I'll admit this novel is pretty good but if your about to start this novel and updating stability is important to you, I suggest you don't . the author has a bad habit of disappearing a week before the end of the month and then posting like 2 chapters after the privilege has reset, it's happened so many times, i have a hard time believing it's not intentional. Also sometimes he disappears a week after the month starts without any explanation then comes back a few days before the month ends with 2 chapters and a sad story about why he disappeared. I understand that I might sound harsh but he has done this so many times that I'm starting to think that he's just trying to garner sympathy from his readers so they would buy the privilege again next month. Honestly this novel has what it takes to be ranked #1 but the author's deceptive habit is holding it back.
i found this really fun at first. mc seemed fun even though he wasnt smart he was written charismatic. he was an underground fighter but he still had certain principles. unfortunately author writes in the chinese writing style where rape is excused. now if this was a minor incident i would have looked over it but in this particular scene mc rapes a chick right after it. made me so disappointed and disgusted.
I'm just writing this review because of the annoying update stability..... okay, no big deal that there isn't a fixed amount of chapters per day, really, but at least try to keep the updates at the same time per day. one day you get them on point, then one the next morning (why?), then one day with no update (why??), then one day with two chapters (nice) and the next with none (why????). if the author can't keep up with updating/translating say something... or just say: " one chapter per day" no big deal Anyways: Some grammatical errors. But way better than average. Really good and interesting story. Some annoying side stories and/or filler chapters that don't have any value. Is a harem novel. So no characters that are too deep, but at least way above other novels. Nice world background. System/Apocalypse, nothing new, but nicely implemented.
MARVELOUS!!! IF YOU ARE LOOKING FOR SOMETHING THAT WILL GIVE YOU A HUGE AMOUNT OF ENTERTAINMENT THEN THIS NOVEL IS FOR YOU everything is great i have never seen anything that is underrated this much better than many top 10 novels i started reading it when someone wrote a comment on Blood warlock that "armipotent is better than it" such a Great price of work.