Reviews of Deleted

I love the characters and their interactions, they are well crafted and defined. The story reminded me of a lighter "Gunslinger" by Stephen King, while the setting was pretty awesome!

From your writing and character design, is good, the background like the sand dunes in the first chapter was detailed, and also the story development throughout the story was good, overall its fantastic 5 stars for you.

Great story, want to see what happens next. Quick updates so far, hope it continues. Like the other world elements, good fantasy. Want better explanations of who the main character and her dragon are

I like your work. Even though it's short it attracts my attention. Gladly read more again if there are more chapters but for now, keep up the good work! Love the characters!

When I saw the Author’s writing I immediately added this gem in my library. I love the quality of flow. Maybe she really took time writing those. I think author needs to keep thinking of ideas to maintain the readers. i love dragons, so this one hooks me up. Keep it up!!!

Oh my I'm first I'm so happy hahaahaa okay, first thing first I love it, why I rate is perfect because I love it and the story is very interesting it also caught my curiosity and the whole setting inside the story is very well place and the story back ground too. I don't want to broaden my explanation I love it and if you guys want something a very explicit, wonderful and unique story try this I definitely recommended this <3 <3 <3. Keep going author-nim don't give up I will read your whole story I will wait for more chapters to come.

Very good read has a good flow to the storyline. Character development is great and keeps you wanting to know what happens next and world development is awesome.

This is a very nice story which clearly the author has put a lot of thought in. The characters are well designed and the plot is very interesting. I am a fan of this genre and I hope you keep on writing!

Is it creepy that I want to hug the dragon? Anyways your writing style is actually beautiful. It's just so watery, in as good way. It's literally smooth. I also like the explanation of the fantasy elements, and love the character design. Also, a lot of webnovel books are so long, but this one isn't, which is amazing! Adding this beauty to my library instantly!

So, I like your plot there! It is intriguing, the characters are entertaining too that makes it lively, which is a plus point. Overall, this story is a great one! Keep up the good work, Author!

The title of this novel draw my attention to this book. And when I opened to read, I wasn't disappointed at all. The use of language is great and well polished. Kudos to the writer for such a great work.

First person story [img=recommend] Its good read, but the long line make me hard to stay. there even 10 long line in 1 paragraph. Maybe it's just me, but try a paragraph with just 4 or 5 long line. It will make you chapter look neat and it can read it easily. [img=coins]

The writing style is very interesting. Characters are portrayed beautifully. I'm so looking forward to the character development. Keep up the good work author!!! Can't wait to read more

Personally, I really love the detail thats been put in the story from chapter 1 and as it continues in the later few ones. It has its own uniqueness to it, which i recommend others to read! Overall nIce story!

Amazing! Heru the dragon who can turn into a human form and Aries, these duo can take you to an exciting world so different from ours. It's like reading a Sci-fi, mixed with spells, magic and all combined. It's an entertaining read, filled with adventure! A captivating read for me! Well done Author! Good job! Keep it up!

Your story is highly immersive. I find myself walking along the characters; feeling their emotions, and it speaks volumes of how well you tell your story. I hope to see this through to the end :)

Great work! Honestly, I think all amazing because of their great the Patience to slowly write the chapters one by one and the persistent to make them better and the building of the world involved. Simply Amazing

Amazing so far. The author has an incredible way of telling the story and making you want to know more. A definite page turner so luckily there have been quick uploads so far. I am loving it and I can't wait to read more.

The characters are well defined and interesting, the story flows with its own pace. What makes this story a good read, though, is the background. The world is built with such care. You have a new creature or magic craft pretty much every chapter, and they're all full of creativity. Good job, author, you have fantastic inventiveness :)

Hi Kystal88! I read a few chapters in, and, for the most part, I enjoy what I read! I will say that it feels a bit heavy at the start, and I wasn't sure exactly what was going on, but details slowly presented themselves and I got a grasp for the story! I very much enjoy your ability to paint a picture with your words, as well! The exposition is decently paced, as is the dialogue. Please keep it up, I look forward to reading more in the future!