I'd love to read this. But the use of two languages really gets to me and prevents me from truly capturing the feelings and images being portrayed in every scene. It just gives me a headache *sighs* A wonderful premise and the characters seems to have great potentional but the mixed language is very unbearable. 😔
This story was great the plot and it's characters. And for me, I really like it so I recommend it to others to read. I'm not being bias, it just get to my heart. I wish you will give us some wonderful work. Thank you!!! I love it. Fantastic and magnificent, your story is the best. Even though that I like more on action story with the touch of fantasy, I really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable also I really like it thank so much.