Reviews of Apostle part- 1

Not bad, but like someone said earlier it would be better to take your time to describe surroundings before jumping to the next. Will support you

I have to say, I kind of got jealous on this book. It's good and interesting, I wish there wasn't an end to it. I liked tehe background and quality, its very grabbing indeed.

Take your time describing the surroundings and situation, before jumping to the next. I got lost when I read about the chest and the important papers. What are them? Why are they important? Why are they separated?