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Read Apostle part- 1 novel written by the author PARASSHARMA7274 on Webnovel, This serial novel genre is Sci-fi stories, covering action, adventure. ✓ Newest updated ✓ All rights reserved
Not bad, but like someone said earlier it would be better to take your time to describe surroundings before jumping to the next. Will support you
I have to say, I kind of got jealous on this book. It's good and interesting, I wish there wasn't an end to it. I liked tehe background and quality, its very grabbing indeed.
Take your time describing the surroundings and situation, before jumping to the next. I got lost when I read about the chest and the important papers. What are them? Why are they important? Why are they separated?