Reviews of ApocalypseNow¡¡
ApocalypseNow¡¡
Vikingbaldo
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Seems interesting but main character is sometimes call he and other times she making it very confusing about the main characters gender. The story has potential but grammar is low quality and many sentences are repetitive
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Pls try and improve your grammer too much mistakes in the sentences it gets too confusing, also the Mc is too trusting considering the fact he just got back from the apocalyse he's action and behaving no direct from the other survivors. Also he just revealed he was informed of the incoming disaster who in their right mind does that, the atitude of the teacher changed too quickly she went from teacher to a love struck 16yr old also the Mental condition of the mc went from 50yrs apocalyse survivor to a boy playing WOW