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Reviews of Apocalypse : The tale of a hero

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Apocalypse : The tale of a hero

Princeboi

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Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

Great start! I'd like to see how the story progresses in the future. There were some punctuation errors as I've already pointed out. You should fix that. And the cover can be slightly more appealing. Other than that, great job! Keep writing.

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DaisukiDayoSenpai
DaisukiDayoSenpaiLv12DaisukiDayoSenpai

Scenic descriptions... check! Fresh character... check! Plot... check! I really enjoy reading these types of books. Looking forward to reading the next chapters!!! Watch out for word usage since it tends to get less descriptive the more we use more words. It happens to all authors so it needs constant improvement. All in all, you're off to a good start! Just slap a nice cover on your book and you're going places! Keep it up, dear author!

raima_alam
raima_alamLv2raima_alam

I love this book so much.Hoping to read the other chapters soon cause its amazing. This is my favourite genre and so far I liked this book😍😍😍

LyingCrowPromises
LyingCrowPromisesLv10LyingCrowPromises

Well written beginning. I liked the first chapter and I think this story has a great potential. I just hope that the author will pay a little more attention to the writing quality, but otherwise, everything is good and to my taste.

Readoholic
ReadoholicLv10Readoholic

Very creative and descriptive writing. The start was perfect wrt to the plot but its just one chapter as of now so would be waiting eagerly to see how the story unfolds further. The very important thing you need to focus on right now is grammar for upcoming chapters. Rest everything is wonderful. Waiting for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. :)

JustLikeWriting777
JustLikeWriting777Lv1JustLikeWriting777

Ok. first chapter read and I gotta say, you brought your story exactly to the point. Very gripping. And the best part is that since it's about an apocalypse, you can enter your story in the contest! But do it research of your own since I still don't know what that supposed to be about. But what I'm saying is that your book is great.

tuba_san
tuba_sanLv3tuba_san

I've only read the first chapter. And it's setting up a very vast universe with hunters and monsters. It's written in a first person style which is pretty cool. The grammer isn't top-notch but I think that if the author went through it and fixed the errors, this chapter would become 10 times more immersive. You improve as you write but don't forget to come back and fix anything that you've already written.

Immortal_eve4
Immortal_eve4Lv2Immortal_eve4

Your descriptions were great and deep that it brought me to another world. Your writing style made me immersed especially how you used first pov. I only read the first chapter but all I could say was this is great. Good job :)

Joskylar
JoskylarLv3Joskylar

Nice story. And the synopsis is nice too. As this story is progressing. And the first chapter was nicely begin . Hope more chapters. And for supporting the author I'm giving 5 rates it this story because it's deseve it. Good job.

SAMEDITZ
SAMEDITZLv1SAMEDITZ

Mmmmmm this is osm novel and story is also good but sometimes I felt like I am reading attack on tittan but over all nice work and also character development is awesome

Sonia_Bhatt
Sonia_BhattLv1Sonia_Bhatt

good chapter. I like the setting. I believe character and surrounding description could be better. but overall many things are great, such as reciprocating feeling of characters and the situation easily appear and understandable.