Princeboi
Scenic descriptions... check! Fresh character... check! Plot... check! I really enjoy reading these types of books. Looking forward to reading the next chapters!!! Watch out for word usage since it tends to get less descriptive the more we use more words. It happens to all authors so it needs constant improvement. All in all, you're off to a good start! Just slap a nice cover on your book and you're going places! Keep it up, dear author!
Very creative and descriptive writing. The start was perfect wrt to the plot but its just one chapter as of now so would be waiting eagerly to see how the story unfolds further. The very important thing you need to focus on right now is grammar for upcoming chapters. Rest everything is wonderful. Waiting for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. :)
Ok. first chapter read and I gotta say, you brought your story exactly to the point. Very gripping. And the best part is that since it's about an apocalypse, you can enter your story in the contest! But do it research of your own since I still don't know what that supposed to be about. But what I'm saying is that your book is great.
I've only read the first chapter. And it's setting up a very vast universe with hunters and monsters. It's written in a first person style which is pretty cool. The grammer isn't top-notch but I think that if the author went through it and fixed the errors, this chapter would become 10 times more immersive. You improve as you write but don't forget to come back and fix anything that you've already written.