Reviews of Apocalypse isn't a RPG

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I'm ngl the story seems pretty good, just fix a couple of grammar mistakes and please, for the love of god, don't turn the MC into a psychopath I've seen this happen several times where the MC turned from evil to psychotic

Hello guys, its my first book and I hope u will give a lot of feedback. English is not my first language and so be please gentle and criticize the a** out of me. Your Author AinsSama