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This is a new to me to read Female leading MC who struggle in Apocalypse world. The building character is good. The writing is good too. But do not expect the story located on earth we know. Maybe I will give a little bit hint, the people before apocalypse seems ****** different from our earth we know. Moreover, the big companies Author mentioned is not the same we already acknowledge. From there I can accept this novel with ease. For Author: Keep it up for this novel. I hope you don't drop this novel. Because if you polish it harder you can make interesting things in your novel. And again you can make forum on disqus where you can ask your reader one or two suggestion. Cheers
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keep up the good work... and please don't drop... I like this story but the story development can be improved more... so good luck... exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp exp
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