WiMaiRi
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It was a good idea until the author started doing a bunch of unnecessary things. Now? A total waste of time Writing Q = 4 Stability of U = 5. One chapter a day Story D = 3. The plot in other worlds is kinda fine, but the plot 'IRL' is boring asf Character D = 3. Some of the MC decisions make me ask myself if he has brain damage
Quality: it's a Chinese MTNL translation,... need I say anymore...make my eye look like I had overcharge sharingan. Character: he himself thinks he is smart only to be a stupid naive, goody two shoes with wuxia MC personality. update: the speed of the update is astonishing...(5 star) but I wish writer had just focused on redoing the work and just concentrated on quality rather then quantity. world: the background of world visited are all mixed up for MC's convenience...so leaves a huge gap of plot holes... p.s: I don't think the writer has any idea about some of the worlds and characters as they are out of character plus has their moods all over the place with no control over their emotion. pps: the premise of the story was good but actual work lacks contents and detail and really need grammertical corrections plus with research on the world MC is in and characters he is interacting with.
I like the how the first world and start of second world but as soon as he got his first companion I started to get bored because he said he needs them but with his ability he could easily be come a one man army not have to take anyone with him and I find that a lot more interesting then him just picking up people and using his a ability to give them different powers
well, i'll give brief review. writing quality is good for me, rathwr than several crappy ff in this webnovel. update stability is good. story development,character design, and world background is good. please dont compare this with the original one (planes walker copy) that fanfic was horrible. apocalypse with young master vibe, too many naming with chinese name with domineering personality, mc power development is weak as F U C K. how the hell planes walker' MC still weak when he get infinity stone and already crosses third world??!. this story is recommended by be personally. lol
It’s good except everything that makes the mc unique he just gives it to his companions. Like, his ability to copy other abilities, So when he get an ability he would give it to all his friends and that make himself the weakest since everyone except him had special traits themselves. Like, why doesn’t the author just give all his companion the ability to copy already? Like, whenever he gets an ability he shares it with everyone. And sometimes he will get an ability and become good at using it, then he will give the power and the knowledge of how to master it to his companions so they don’t even need to work hard for it. They leech off the mc and the mc doesn’t even care. his companions are all like issei (dxd) except not pervert and a little smarter. And mc is just naturally stupid. Good story but horrible characters. You’ll get why I’m so annoyed when you reach till chapter 53.
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Writing Quality (2/5): At times it's decent and at times it's absolutely horrendous. However, the author has told us, the readers, that English is not their main language. (Mine isn't as well) Stability of Updates (5/5): Extremely good at the moment. A chapter a day. Story Development (4/5): The story development is pretty good since you get to follow Gray through his journey in gaining power. However, at times, I'm still extremely confused as to how strong Gray actually is. It seems he's extremely strong at one moment, and then at the other, he's pretty weak. Character Design (4/5): Pretty good. World Background (3/5): It's a nice idea that Gray wants to become stronger to regain the "city," his father left for him. But I'm having a hard time understanding what that city's name is? Is it Glory City? If the grammar and punctuation were better, I'd given it an overall rating of 4/5, but man...it really kills the story. If the author reads this, a tip would be to use the application Grammarly, since it's free and it would improve your writing a lot.