Reviews of Anime/Cultivation System

I went back and fixed the first chapters. My writing has improved compared to before. I use grammerly so there isn't spelling mistakes but I might still have some. I release chapter's Friday and Saturdays now sometimes Sunday. I hope you all like the story try it out and I would really appreciate you all reviewing my novel.

I enjoy how the story is progressing it's interesting. Keep up the goodwork author. Keep writing chapters and don't drop and I will keep on supporting.

Amazing story line. I love how the characters are developed. The mc is really amazing love his personality. Keep the story up looking forward to the rest.

I like it good job man little bit of spelling errors but it's fine. I can't wait to read the rest of the story looking forward to it. Keep up the good work.

So far I'm enjoy it! You can really tell how your writing style has improved throughout the chapters. Good job man! I would say to be a little more careful with punctuation and be a little more aware of the pace of the story-- should keep the flow from going too fast but don't make it too slow with a bunch of details. Other than that, you did pretty good. Looking forward to more chapters.

I really like the character development and all the character s he gathers into his faction. I wish you would update morr often though. ** I like your avatar of Bam

I really liked it how it begins but Bro you make no sense and i really can't get myself to read more . You basically waste all his points and literally everything he has on his gf and wait a minuite isn't she already as strong as Saint 9 -_- -_-. Sorry but this really pisses me off and i really don't get myself to read it with his gf. The first thing she does after they met in the new world is ....nothing. He gave her all this and she just stands ther like it is natural that he does this for her and it pisses me off how he is so weak compared to his gf and lrt's look back. He has 7 wishes and his gf is basically on top of the world from the start and he is like a bug /ant and it would all have been okay if she would be more thankful but she isn't he sents 1 million from 5 million of his points for stones she can use and she doen't even says anything and just stsrts to cultivate ?????? OK i stop writing because i would just get worse . The idea is really great and i would love to read this story if either ... 1. His gf doesn't exits. 2. She is much more thankful to him. 3. You don't make her as strong as she is from the beginning but either the MC should

Super anime. I gave this story a 4 star in everything but stability since it uploads daily a lot. It is cool. At times I was kind of bored? It's long. And slow. But then it will be super fast. I don't know. It has good grammar most of the times. Sometimes it fails at that though. It was good though. I liked it.

this isn't a deep story. this isn't even really a massive super hit. but. it has a charm. the characters are fun. the scenes are fun. the system is fun. and isn't that all we really ask for in a story? something that is just fun?

The start of the story is good you made her gf accompany him but it all got **** bro when you just make his gf more op than him the concept is good but the development is what can I say slightly bad, it should be better if their power is equal or he is stronger maybe a bit but you made it like the gf is more of a mc than him bye dropping this your progress for him is the slowest of all and his gf is already ahead of him many times than his progress bye bye just hope this will be successful even thoug with all that sht with his gf bye ciao sayonara

After months of reading this novel it is by far one of my favorites. In love with all the characters, MC's girlfriend is my favorite though, and I like the interesting & unique storyline. Hopefully this novel will continue releasing more chapters!!

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So i Guess i wasted my time? Reading the first two chaps with ranks and stuff. the thing that ruined It for me is her yep her Plus i feel like its just gunna get worse with 2 main charcters the author has to have Them grow from experince which would Mean double the work but then again what experinCes wOuld they grow from? I give up but yall check it out and see for yourself dont mind me.

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Trash wishes, the first 2 we’re okay but the rest is bs. No one is making such stupid wishes unless they’re a 5 year old toddler.

Ficou muito bom, porém eu acho que ele poderia ter alguma besta divina Recém-nascido para nutri - la e quando a besta ele/ela crescesse pudesse ajudá-los em sua jornada para o pico do mundo ou do cultivo.

one of the best novels I've read so far I hope to see more of this . filer*%/*!*/@*%#*/@*%@<%#&"@&%-&$-&"-&$'skgrzngsjgzjfsjvzjfxjgxjgx

Great job, hope you can write more chapters l, thanks for your hard working, keep on, 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 more chapters many thanks

Read it,it gets really good..........................,.....................................................,,,,,,,...,........,..................