17 UPDATE PLEASE READ!!

First of all hello and thank you for reading this.

I realized myself I am not comfortable with how my ideas turned out written down so I am taking a complete take at rewriting this story right now.

For everyone who has read this far I would be happy and thankful for any reviews regarding the story and the writing style of course. I am rewriting both of that and also in a longer way. So if you dont mind please give me some feedback and tips so the remake and the continuation of the novel will turn out in a good way, thank you!:)