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Reviews of Ancient Vampire in a Modern World

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Ancient Vampire in a Modern World

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Dayside
DaysideLv12Dayside

God awful writing quality. The story itself is pretty much written by a child. The author is tunneling the story and not really expanding on the world too much. There are tons of mistakes that are so easy to spot that it makes reading it hard.

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totoro24th
totoro24thLv2totoro24th

I GET IT!! I GET IT!! HAHAHA I think I get it... The biggest misunderstanding of all haha!! I won't spoil anymore. I almost drop this book because of it but then, haha. The author doesn't want to explain it so I won't spoil anymore.. This is already my second review lol. But the grammar still need improvement though. Hope this won't drop.

AngstR
AngstRLv1AngstR

Who the hell is Keiji!?... Isn't the mc name Vlad and Scott?... I don't mind about those naming sense(Klyzer and the other)..... Well the plot is good at least(Even thought he was supposed to be old monster but those cliche... whatever).. also the heroine development was too hastened... Overall it's good... just good no more or less... In my personal opinion

Nomed_Forcraziness
Nomed_ForcrazinessLv2Nomed_Forcraziness

............................................................................. Anyo! Nice book Bro! I love it! though the first chapters were boring. But later it was nice. Salamat Sayo for your Hard work. Hoping for more in the future.

Havency_Taylor
Havency_TaylorLv11Havency_Taylor

The grammar is some of the worst I’ve ever read and I’m hoping it eventually gets better. The story has great potential, however in the first two chapters it’s completely garbage.

vampireKun
vampireKunLv2vampireKun

This is a gem please don't drop soon. I like his style and aahhhh...... Nevermind!!! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Anonymous_Reo
Anonymous_ReoLv3Anonymous_Reo

Writing quality could do with a bit of work, especially with punctuation marks and all. Overall nice one hopefully, it doesn't get dropped.

Nanak_Khazanewala
Nanak_KhazanewalaLv2Nanak_Khazanewala

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timepiece94
timepiece94Lv13timepiece94

I'm sorry I really tried I really really tried to read this but it's just so bad work on grammar a little get your story straight then I'll start reading again

MrFalan
MrFalanLv14MrFalan

Learn the diffrence between He and she FFS I get that sentence can be wrong grammer can be misleading but I am on ch 30 there is still same mistake annoying AF anyway thank for the effort

Ritankar_Sarkar_
Ritankar_Sarkar_Lv10Ritankar_Sarkar_

It felt like a typical vampire story at first, but then it turned out to be a time-shift case, idea is kind of uniquely hidden inside the story- and I can feel there is many mysteries hidden inside this plot!

cosmik
cosmikLv15cosmik

GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD GOOD

SB_Moon
SB_MoonLv13SB_Moon

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NthSHI
NthSHILv4NthSHI

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AlexisCain
AlexisCainLv4AlexisCain

this story, but I have no idea why it stopped at 114th chapter . Did the author drop it? will this continue to update? I sincerely hope this novel gets more chapters while maintaining its quality thus far

BigNovelBigDream
BigNovelBigDreamLv1BigNovelBigDream

This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

Vanxy
VanxyLv13Vanxy

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InfiniteZer0
InfiniteZer0Lv12InfiniteZer0

While the story is not bad, it lacks direction, consistency, and quality excitement. The mc does not have much of a goal or task that he is actively moving towards. Not to mention the many contradictions for the mc's behavior, for being a over several hundred years, he has the emotional fluctuation of a teenage girl on her period. As for the fight scenes, you might as well skim them, they are not great and often confusing (there was one fight in game against a team of rangers- 2 melee and 2 range with the same weapons and no distinguishing characteristics between them- so one of them seemed to go super saiyan and the other was just there. he also seemed a bit pretentious with giving the characters a bola as a weapon)

Zenithlr
ZenithlrLv4Zenithlr

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AsimiLykos
AsimiLykosLv15AsimiLykos

good story so far. Author I'm curious I'd you need a beta reader/Editor? I'm good with English vocab and Grammer. I dont need any money. Please feel free to contact on discord, Fenris#6876