ChanduGod
I am enjoying writing this, I hope you enjoy reading this. :) --- Writing Quality :- Not bad... but also not the best. Stability of Updates :- 2 chapters per day, however, it will go up if the book rank goes up Story Development :- yup, I can say, this is good! it only gets better and better. Character Development :- good. MC will have harem, but not too big nor too small. there is romance too. No annoying characters. No Young Masters. World Background :- This world is unique, I build it and explained everything. it may confuse you a little at start, as long as you read, you will know and understand everything. This story may look slow but... "Slowest is the fastest way" have a good read. I hope you will like... no love it! :)
author there is r 18 tag but there is no describing scene or the s#x skip, I hope you can fix this, I know overdoing is bad, here is solution to this every time he does the thing you describ it when new women .... , from time to time with previous women , balance everything, I am not writer, so I don't know good pace etc, overall this My recommendation. (I am at chapter 20) I don't know if you changed it.
Terrible Grammar, really bad character development, bad world background illustration, no character growth and worst of all starting with an MC that is 70+ years old? No thanks. I guess this novel has this high rating because he deletes reviews with low rating otherwise I dont know what you people in the 5 star review section are smoking to give such rating. Note! if this comment is deleted I will be posting a Screenshot of posting this review to prove it was deleted. Thank you.
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