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An Unfortunate Nobody's (Forced) Adventure

Justheguy

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Justheguy
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I have an annoucement to make! Ignore the 5 star review. I officially declare that I will never make another chapter of cultivation novels, ever again! Instead I will start on RWBY, and do so. Cultivation novels, bye bye!

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eccentricbeing18
eccentricbeing18Lv3eccentricbeing18

This is random with no real goal or agenda. Just a guy with billions of experience but is mostly a joke power wise or intelligent wise of the bullshit scale. Oh and he swears with some 4th wall breaking. Great -_- Really? Billions of years of death, pain, and wars but still panics? The background is a joke, his skills is shit and his brain is shit covered with piss shoved up a million guy's ass. It's more like a rant of someone with adhd with some masochistic issues the author couldn't admit to himself.

David_Drake
David_DrakeLv4David_Drake

Good plot and story so far. The arcs are individual worlds so far and the MC seems to be on top of things. One thing I do dislike is the constant cussing of the MC. Its distracting and doesn't fit the image of a billion year old man. I do hope the MC will eventually find a way to transition through the multiverse with out having to die.

shortcke
shortckeLv4shortcke

Nice nice. Interesting plot. Anybody interested in anime, good books here. Highly recommend this book. I love how the character cusses freely.

TaintedMetal
TaintedMetalLv2TaintedMetal

The plot takes its time to develop as the chapters go on, each with its own scenes and they are accompanied with a large amount of well placed references towards anime, manga and other cultural media references. Said references are of course entertaining. The story does live up to its expectation of chaotic, seeing how there are many things going on. My only criticism is that some of the sentences have too much "sound effects." Words like "BOOM" seem more like something that would appear in an audio version compared to the written book. But overall, great work.

Waqas
WaqasLv3Waqas

The story is interesting I just dont like that Mcs soo weak also put the harem list up as I will find out who's part of who's harem I like that the mcs chill with zhao yan but I dont like that theres nothing defing about him accept his knowledge also he has live however long but knows how to build weapons from earth his first world which is stupid

Pimple_Face_13
Pimple_Face_13Lv4Pimple_Face_13

Bull****tery The most ridiculously op ability I love it! Exp exp exp exp exp exp...............................................................

LazyMonkey18
LazyMonkey18Lv4LazyMonkey18

The Mc is interesting loves to troll. Good plot and story devolvement. Can not wait for more chapter to see what happens I want to see how the author takes it from here

dragon_draws
dragon_drawsLv11dragon_draws

its a good story with good characters and elements but it doesn't feel like it has direction which admittedly is part of its charm but can still make reading feel awkward

Sema_
Sema_Lv4Sema_

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crimsonitaci
crimsonitaciLv11crimsonitaci

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Lustsifer
LustsiferLv13Lustsifer

This is actually a good story! Although I want to leave when reading a few first chapters about Power Rangers, because I am confused with the writing style of the author. I am currently on my 13th chapter, and so far so good. Chapters length are long too, average of 20-ish page. There are 50-ish page chapters too. MC character is quite funny and kinda troll, well he is around 5-ish billion years of age so it's a given. World development, it can still be explored. Well, I just got to 13th chapter when I make this so I don't know about the latest chapters. Writing, nothing to add just small mistake here and there.

Dawn_in_dark
Dawn_in_darkLv4Dawn_in_dark

This is a good book. I liked it very much and definitely support the author. Gonna recommend this book to readers. All the best wishes for further writing. Good luck...[img=recommend]

Jwcwwd
JwcwwdLv2Jwcwwd

Like any good and very well written harem books, this takes the cake!I love how good this book is and good job and keep up the good work, author-san!

Aaliyah_Stark_
Aaliyah_Stark_Lv3Aaliyah_Stark_

WOW !! This is great. I read the synopsis and it hooked me making me want to read the novel. Keep going you're doing great and sill wait for regular updates.

shrEk2o3
shrEk2o3Lv12shrEk2o3

To those who are into anime and comics, you should take time to read this. Highly recommended. The plot is very interesting. It also has a relatable MC, Markus with a k. It has a unique quality in it, keeps you on your toes, and would keep you reading. Good job author. Keep it up :D

ZOA
ZOALv12ZOA

I really liked the description by author. The pace and plot of this story is just awesome. I think you can write quite well so keep on writing and update soon.... Looking forward to it... 😍😍

Aislinn_Jasper
Aislinn_JasperLv3Aislinn_Jasper

Nice plot and quite interesting to read. Everyone who's interested in anime and comics should read. It's worth reading one. Though I'm not much into this genre still, you did a great job. All the best for upcoming chapters.

tuba_san
tuba_sanLv3tuba_san

The multiverse jumping plot combined with a no nonsense MC, who constantly breaks the fourth wall and interacts with the author: is a combo I haven't seen on Webnovel before. Very unique. The MCs background and personality is all original, so it has been explained in the novel but the universes he travels to aren't explained. So to truly enjoy this novel a reader should have background information on this content. The only suggestion I have for the author is that keep the MCs dialogues, thoughts and the narration as three different things. For the first chapter the MC is just giving background information so it doesn't matter as much. But in the later chapters there are dialogues between the MC and author, or the MC thinks something that breaks the fourth wall. At the same time the narrative is in first person so the MC is mentioning his own actions. All of these should be separated. The dialogues are already split up but do also separate the thoughts. This is just my suggestion though, so feel free to ignore it.

MichelleLeeee
MichelleLeeeeLv3MichelleLeeee

Wow.... just wow. I only read 3 chapters and had to review right away. This story is packed with sarcasm, comedy, and a bit of fourth walling. The MC is relatable and definitely someone we've all come across before. I enjoy the different jumps and changes, but the MC is constant in his attitude. Well done author!