Justheguy
This is random with no real goal or agenda. Just a guy with billions of experience but is mostly a joke power wise or intelligent wise of the bullshit scale. Oh and he swears with some 4th wall breaking. Great -_- Really? Billions of years of death, pain, and wars but still panics? The background is a joke, his skills is shit and his brain is shit covered with piss shoved up a million guy's ass. It's more like a rant of someone with adhd with some masochistic issues the author couldn't admit to himself.
Good plot and story so far. The arcs are individual worlds so far and the MC seems to be on top of things. One thing I do dislike is the constant cussing of the MC. Its distracting and doesn't fit the image of a billion year old man. I do hope the MC will eventually find a way to transition through the multiverse with out having to die.
The plot takes its time to develop as the chapters go on, each with its own scenes and they are accompanied with a large amount of well placed references towards anime, manga and other cultural media references. Said references are of course entertaining. The story does live up to its expectation of chaotic, seeing how there are many things going on. My only criticism is that some of the sentences have too much "sound effects." Words like "BOOM" seem more like something that would appear in an audio version compared to the written book. But overall, great work.
The story is interesting I just dont like that Mcs soo weak also put the harem list up as I will find out who's part of who's harem I like that the mcs chill with zhao yan but I dont like that theres nothing defing about him accept his knowledge also he has live however long but knows how to build weapons from earth his first world which is stupid
This is actually a good story! Although I want to leave when reading a few first chapters about Power Rangers, because I am confused with the writing style of the author. I am currently on my 13th chapter, and so far so good. Chapters length are long too, average of 20-ish page. There are 50-ish page chapters too. MC character is quite funny and kinda troll, well he is around 5-ish billion years of age so it's a given. World development, it can still be explored. Well, I just got to 13th chapter when I make this so I don't know about the latest chapters. Writing, nothing to add just small mistake here and there.
The multiverse jumping plot combined with a no nonsense MC, who constantly breaks the fourth wall and interacts with the author: is a combo I haven't seen on Webnovel before. Very unique. The MCs background and personality is all original, so it has been explained in the novel but the universes he travels to aren't explained. So to truly enjoy this novel a reader should have background information on this content. The only suggestion I have for the author is that keep the MCs dialogues, thoughts and the narration as three different things. For the first chapter the MC is just giving background information so it doesn't matter as much. But in the later chapters there are dialogues between the MC and author, or the MC thinks something that breaks the fourth wall. At the same time the narrative is in first person so the MC is mentioning his own actions. All of these should be separated. The dialogues are already split up but do also separate the thoughts. This is just my suggestion though, so feel free to ignore it.
Wow.... just wow. I only read 3 chapters and had to review right away. This story is packed with sarcasm, comedy, and a bit of fourth walling. The MC is relatable and definitely someone we've all come across before. I enjoy the different jumps and changes, but the MC is constant in his attitude. Well done author!