Reviews of An Undying Love Story

I've been reading this book for a while now. I enjoyed how the story progressed from a light-hearted novel to something more thrilling. Keep up the great work author!

I’m new to WN and I stumbled across your book in the forum. I gave it a read and instantly added it to my library. Continue writing and all the best with the contest!

Engaging story; a definite suggestion for those who enjoy light hearted novels. MC is cool and relatable, descriptive writing is beautiful.

Wonderful story, an engaging plotline! The lead is very relatable, and the unique diary style writing is very creative. Cannot wait for future updates!!

I love Ella!! She's literally me!!

as a small author myself, I know how much it means when someone gives a good review or a stone so out of my sympathy I hope others notice your light novel!

Heya! I love your book, right from the start I was attracted to the novel and I learnt the lesson I must live my life to the fullest....so that I have no regret when I am on my deathbed. Second, the way this is all written in a diary, I can just relate to that as I write one myself. So it's kind of like yeah her story is just like mine. There were some typos maybe but who cares ( cuz I don't, I just care about the storyline 😁) Last but not the least great work and I look forward to seeing more of your work.

Love the story, especially the formula it was written in especially the diaries. This story succeeded from the very start in making me very engaged in the plot as well as making me feel emotional about it. I want to congratulate the author for the overall good job they have done and can’t wait for more. Give it a try, it’s definitely worth it.

Ok as a full full heads up, this review is probably biased as heck, but oh wells ^-^ I'm just such a sucker for these types of stories (memories, nostalgia, everything), and this is legit the only one I've found on WN so far. I love the just really straightforward narration and how she's struggling with reconciling with death. I love how there's actual concern for people in her life but also her own. I love how realistic all the dialogues and the settings are!!!! Okok that being said, realistically, if I wasn't so biased by the premise of your story, I think I would give writing quality a 4/5. A large part of the reason is literally that your punctuations in dialogues are all a bit messed up. If you have a punctuation mark, whether it be ! or ? there's no longer a need for another comma. But anywaysss Good luck!!! And I've added the story to my library :D

Added to library! The first review just couldn't be enough after I read the whole thing! I'm waiting for a new chapter to get uploaded. Hopefully, I will get mesmerized by your style again. Great Author! Keep going!

The novel starts super strong with strong emotions which makes it even more admirable and catching to the readers eye. A great storyline written so well. Overall this has been an amazing read definitely worth a vote

I really love this story i hope the author doesn't give up on it🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

You brought the last scene first like a movie which I liked and the first chapter was very emotional. Fantastic. And from the second to the third chapter, I also started to feel young with Lena. I would say the plot is very interesting with your writing. I am not saying anything about the world background because you have just started writing, there are not many chapters, maybe we will see more development after that. I would definitely recommend it to everyone. Great work. keep it up.

It's a notable novel, and it has a promising storyline. I really like that it was written in a diary entry form. And hence, the use of present tense, which is good. It has an interesting premise, and the story development was intriguing. The characterization was greatly done, and so was the world-building. It has long chapters, which I really enjoyed, and the descriptions are good. There were just a few minor grammatical errors like misuse of punctuation marks and typos. I hope that those could be edited, and I also think it'll be better for the long paragraphs on the first few chapters to be divided. Smoothening those could help the readers to digest the scenes more. Overall, it was a great novel. I really like the story, and I'll be rooting for it! I meant no offense to the author, and I wish you the best of luck!

It was a pretty emotional start. I had to stop reading for a moment to collect myself. I like the timeline/journal entry style writing as well, keep up the good work!

This novel has a very unique plot, I was immediately pulled in by the storyline. The novel has enough intrigue to truly keep you reading about this old lady lol. However, the novel is written in the present tense which makes it a bit confusing since by right, novels and stories overall are to be written in the past tense. The novel started nice and clean with little to no grammatical and spelling errors but as I read on they became a bit more prominent giving the impression that the author started to rush while writing. Overall, this novel is beaming with potential and I enjoyed the few chapters I've read so far. [img=recommend]

Amazing work author. The plot line is quite engaging and cool. The novel piqued my interest right away. I got bit lost in the book,Which is a good sign always. Keep Up the Great work !! Looking forward to more chapters.

So, I like it. As soon as I read the synopsis of the story, I was interested. I haven't read all of the chapters yet, but it is definitely a good ready and I intend to keep up with the story. As with most stories, (including my own), there are a couple punctuation areas that could use an edit, but I enjoy it so far. Thanks for posting :)

Hey man, I like the title of the story, the concept behind the story is nice. I added your story I just hope that you will add more chapters in the future looking forward. keep up the good work.