Reviews of An heir for a legacy
An heir for a legacy
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- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
Grammar and punctuation do not exist. You will have to guess if a character is speaking out loud sometimes. Decent story. Needs an editor, badly.
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writing quality could be far better. I honestly don't care about grammer much,if my reading flow doesn't get interrupted. But,this style of story telling makes the experience worst. Please try to improve the way of story telling. Then,it will compensate a lot even if your world background and character design is a bit lacking. And even though I don't know about your story development and update stability... I hope it will get much better.. Thank you for writing....
