Commonnerfer
I don’t think I have ever shamelessly rated my own book before. Wanted to give it a try. I don’t see what’s so special about it? Put a lot of work into this book with research and stuff. First try at an adventure/romance still not comfortable writing those R-18 chapters so it might take awhile before I’m willing to try that.
I'm going a neutral review. I didn't last very long in the story for several reasons. I understand that this is fanfiction and I'm not far enough to judge the raw writing material however it seems to be updated regylarly but the series starts out from the get go with the requirement of you having knowledge of the following series dragonball z and all it includes fallout the fallout game universe and the games mechanics Ruby another successfull anime i personally haven't watched and what it includes. I suspect there is a few i might have missed but without prior knowledge of the following series will you as a reader be hopelessly lost in regards to what is going on, as it is not explained but is assumed you already know everything that is required to be known. I wish the author best of luck with the series and I will likely try to give it another shot if I ever get around to watching ruwby and try to update my review around it. so the tldr from my perspective do I recommend you skip this or seek out all the prior series and attain the knowledge required to enjoy it before you engage with this novel. if you do have the prior series under your belt do I think it is worth giving a shot.
I remember long, long ago (read; this morning) when I started reading this story I was thinking about dropping it. The first... four or so(?) chapters were rough and tough to get into, but man I'm at 122 now and I feel like a wise oji-san when looking back at my younger and more foolish self for ever even considering dropping this amazing fic!
I can't read past chapter 7 it's so hard to read after the 1 year time skip where the MC has a lot of references to others thing eg stark industry. Like why did we even see here start to plot this before the time skip why are we only hearing of it now. Personal I'm not going to read it any more because it jumps to open subject to another to much but I do recommend reading. I'll try to read to ch 10 and will change my review of it gets better. 👍
I think this story is really frantic, it had progressed at a good pass and uploaded really often, it went through plausible reactions in the world of remnet to the insertion of this character to the story. Tho, the main character is indeed blue ruby, with a fair reason I guess, but still, blue ruby with a tail is a complete description of her design.
Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
I was a bit confused in the first 2-3 chapters not really understanding what was going on, but now I've come to really enjoy this work. The main RWBY characters are portrayed accurately in ways that would make sense given their canon character types. The implentation of the mc into the RWBY-verse was also developed very well and feels natural. I have to say that I'm not a huge fan of yuri, but the author made it work in a way that doesn't at all seem forced. 5/5 I'm looking forward to how the story will develop from now on!