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Reviews of ALTERNIVERSE (Original Short Story)

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ALTERNIVERSE (Original Short Story)

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Yggdrasil_
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This book is amazing, keep going!  Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?

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AJHaMMer23
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"Why don't you be a good b*** and sit down" I'm dead Alpha moon is about to put in the work on Osiris she not ready lol. Great chapter been waiting for a new one. And can't wait for the next.

AJHaMMer23
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Bro.....BEST FIGHT IN THIS ENTIRE STORY, My boy Zero is putting up a good fight. I feel like he still has alot of potential to unlock. But that will come with time. Also electrified needs to chill out and work like a team with zero. But as always great chapter and thanks for the early release. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

AJHaMMer23
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Great chapter, love have the development is going so far and how the heroes are being smart to join forces with the vigilantes. Cause transmuter and his group ain't no joke lol, also happy birthday my buddy may you continue to post more draw dropping chapters! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

AJHaMMer23
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Infinity stars for this chapter. I'm happy alterniverse is back in action. I enjoyed the back story and history that was showed from the gods and how we basically now no who Korthax really is or who he "reformed into". But yeah I almost had to hire an assassin because I wanted to rear these stories again. The author is very fortunate he posted a new chapter when he did. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

Doris_Clinton
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AJHaMMer23
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Look out the vigilantes are making their move! But awesome chapter cant wait to read the next one (I wonder what Hexens power is). [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

AJHaMMer23
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Loved this chapter, got to see my boy zero have a little more screen time and also learn that not everyone is a hero for the same reason, also can't wait to see how aqua reacts when she goes to the realm of gods. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

AJHaMMer23
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I want MOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE! But yeah this chapter was dope someone has to help B.A.D out, like without him noticing. That way transmuter won't notice. Phineas is a vlown as usual lol. Also I need to see more on Zero, Jin, and That vigilante that hates zero. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

AJHaMMer23
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🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥😍🔥🔥🔥 Can I PLEASE HAVE ANOTHER CHAPTER! [img=update][img=update][img=update]

AJHaMMer23
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Loved the chapter. It was very detailed and cool how Transmuter was helping all the villans escape. You could also see how much he cared for his old partner and crew. With all these prisoners free I fear our heroes will be in some trouble... 😓[img=update][img=update][img=update]

AJHaMMer23
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I love how you went back to the earlier chapters to show us what how Nuclei was alone for all those years and escaped the glass pod, eventually saving aqua. This story is going far and I really hope others give it a try. [img=update] ❤❤❤🔥

AJHaMMer23
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Lol I read these way to fast. Enjoyable like always thanks for the early chapter. I'm excited to see what comes next and who Mikayla really is 🔥[img=update]

AJHaMMer23
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As always this story always hits. Great chapter, I hate the fact that I have to wait a whole week to read this amazing masterpiece.[img=recommend]

AJHaMMer23
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It's about time lol. Jkjk happy you're back bro and I'm looking forward to how this story progresses as your number one fan. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Susan001
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AJHaMMer23
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I just read chap 49 and 50.......AND BRO I'M SO FREAKING HYPE! These next chapters are probably going to be my favorite! My boy Zero is about to fight Transmuters old right hand man! Can't wait to see what this young hero is made of. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

AJHaMMer23
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FINALLY! THE NAME HAS BEEN CHANGED....lol. It was low key starting to grow though, but any how this chapter was dope too bad retrospect got bodied. Should of picked another power lol.but yeah can't wait for more chapters this is getting really good.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]

AJHaMMer23
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Nice ending to that scuffle I'm happy they taking care of that she wolf because she needs to back off my boy Cerberus lol. Great chapter just can't wait for more to come as I always say. I need to see my boy Zero alot more 👀though, my dude has some potential. But yeah I'm happy to see the clashes between the Heroes and villains and hope to see the heroes and vigilantes get along for the greater good. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

AJHaMMer23
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Amazing chapter, I really enjoyed the fight scenes. Glad B.A.D kinda redeemed himself, I hope the heroes aren't to hard on him. I feel like anyone in his position would of done the same. But as usual I really enjoyed this chapter, can't wait for the next one.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]