DNF
Plot seemed like it was going in a good direction but I couldn't get passed the non-quotation dialog. It was hard to understand if someone was talking, thinking internally, or narrating. Other than that the story was decent.
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I just began to read your work. it's pretty good and awesome. I'll make sure to tell my comments about the full novel soon. Keep writing [img=recommend][img=update]