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Reviews of Alexithymia: The Curse of Transcendence [Remastered]

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Alexithymia: The Curse of Transcendence [Remastered]

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SLiasison
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ProfessionalHater
ProfessionalHaterLv1ProfessionalHater

GAN = Coronavirus beware one and all, this is the plague mentioned in the story . This book was written by a time traveller! 😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠😠

yamiri
yamiriLv1yamiri

Truly a hidden gem. The only negative is that most chapters have a lot of grammatical negatives (there are some good one though) --- Not that i mind much.

JulieSweet98
JulieSweet98Lv1JulieSweet98

It's a very good story and since I'm following and giving stones of power Follow the story friend and do not leave it half as other people seriously, while you go up more chapters, you will see how more people are going to join to read this novel, because it is starting well, good still like this successes and wait for the next cap xD more chapterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

RainyLiquid2020
RainyLiquid2020Lv4RainyLiquid2020

It is a pretty good story :) Some things could be better, but I don't think that takes away from the story. It had moments that were interesting, but it did have moments that took me a while to finish, and did feel like a bit off to me. All in all though it is still really good, and I hope to see more of it!

TheAyuMirai
TheAyuMiraiLv1TheAyuMirai

Great dialogues! We really feel the intensity of the events through them 👌🏾. I can't help but notice there's a complete change in writing style in the CH 4,5. Style consistency is something you should take into account, I think. But it's your book in the end so this is just my opinion. :)

JonnyCabbage
JonnyCabbageLv1JonnyCabbage

Very strong first three chapters, then it kinda loses its pace with the information dump and then it goes back on tracks. I still have lots of questions though, and it feels like not fully finished for the volume, perhaps there will be more updates?

Graffitypen5
Graffitypen5Lv1Graffitypen5

Lots of similarities with Black Mirror, not sure if it is intentional or not, but yeah that was a nice ride. Will keep an eye for the Volume 2 :)

Ron_Azure
Ron_AzureLv2Ron_Azure

What can I say, it's a whole level higher than most novels that I have already read on this site. When I read it, I felt the same vibe as Gosick, a popular anime that I watched years ago. I don't say the story, but the vibe, the atmosphere. And this novel will be a good script for making an anime. Trust me. This is a good novel. Good job.

Alpha_Medic
Alpha_MedicLv2Alpha_Medic

I'll admit, there were several times I was confused during the first few chapters. The constant pacing shift didn't help either. Though, once I was able to reread it a few times, the story itself is amazing! I would recommend finding a singular pacing structure to follow, including predicates and dialogue structure. Other than that, you have a unique and enthralling idea, please keep up with it!

NoahSky
NoahSkyLv2NoahSky

Well thought out and organized plot/story. I like the characters development through out what I've seen so far. Keep up the good work! Just some few grammer errors.

Cofeety
CofeetyLv1Cofeety

The story is really good. This is my first review on webnovel and this story deserves to be reviewed. I really liked transcendence explanation. Keep going author, good job till now!!

Lizdart
LizdartLv1Lizdart

Original and refreshing characters, vividly described fighting scene, after the first 5 chapters I am frankly stunned this story has never been picked up and read by more people. This is good, really good.

XioFeng
XioFengLv1XioFeng

Great writing ! The universe and characters makes you want to know more about them and keep on reading. Really enjoyable to discover the story chapter after chapter.

ConstanceLiu
ConstanceLiuLv1ConstanceLiu

The story seems interesting and I enjoy the advancement made in world-building. There are some grammatical errors but that is fixable if you find an editor. Overall Keep it up, Author!

Picolay
PicolayLv1Picolay

I love this novel and need more chapters asap. I hope it gets chosen........................................................................

Rurue
RurueLv1Rurue

I love the flow of the book it keeps me interested and looking forward to what's going to happen next I hope this book would upgrade from a trial read.

JohnOliverLW
JohnOliverLWLv1JohnOliverLW

Extremely good Novel Great Story ,......,...................................................................................................

Freiyas
FreiyasLv1Freiyas

I love this! I got super engrossed into it immediately i hope that it will be a regularly updated with much speed! please and thank you ! keep it up!

Flowerchild
FlowerchildLv1Flowerchild

Great novel, the beginning is a bit too complex, but once you get into the later chapters, it's much, much better. I recommend..............................