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Chapter #1 - The False God

In the vast expanse of a mountainous terrain we see three people. two in the middle on an intense argument while one is severally injured, and the other is fighting an expanding amount of stone that is forming over his body.

While you struggle with the ever forming stone moving onto your form in desperation and anger you start to speak to the calm looking figure in front of you. "Kisuke Urahara, Do you know how much I despise you? With your great intellect why is it that you don't take independent action? Why in the world is it that you subjugate yourself to that thing?!" You angrily ask in pure confusion.

"Aizen, When you say that thing, are you talking about the soul king... I see, so you saw it didn't you? Well let me explain without the existence of the soul king, the soul society would split into pieces. The soul king is the keystone to all, without that keystone in place the system would fall apart. That my friend is how the world works." Kisuke calmly relies while you struggle fighting with the stone molding around your body.

"That's an argument only a loser would make! A victor should speak of how the world should be, Rather than how the world currently operates. I refuse to accept a world ruled by that thing! I AM A VICTOR I SHOULD DECIDE HOW THE WORLD SHOULD BE!!" You roar back while fighting against the ever growing stone in absolute defiance.

"And how do you expect to achieve that?! The soul king is the one being that maintains reality! Without the soul king order will cease from our very world leaving us without order and structure!" Kisuke angrily spat back.

"How do you know that? Have you seen the world without your beloved soul king? No your scared Kisuke Utrahara you speak of maintaining order and prosperity but under all those lies I see a coward scared to move forward, and to cowardly to take the next step in our evolution!" A new desire in your absolute anger forms to reduce the soul king, and it's pawns to nothing even if you have to take everything with you. While in thought the stone molding onto your body stops entirely, and begins to fall to the ground.

"W-Where are you getting this much Reiryoku!! Your even destroying the seal I placed upon the Hogyoku?!" Kusuke prepares in absolute shock from what your doing.

"WHEN THERES A WANT KISUKE THERE WILL ALWAYS BE A DEMAND, AND THE HOGYOKU IS SUPPLYING SUCH DEMANDS!" You start condensing an ungodly amount of Reiryoku.

Damn it this much power could destroy the soul society, hell, and the living world altogether!!! I need to work quickly "Bankai: Kannonbiraki Benihime Aratame!" Kisuke quickly activate his Bankai in worry.

"It's to late this world and the things connected to it will be consumed!!" In response to Kisuke activating his Bankai you start the Incantation for Hado #90 Black box, however with the ungodly amount of Reiryoku such an attack would be on a planetary level leveling the planet along with what's around it.

"Seeping crest of turbidity. Arrogant vessel of lunacy! Boil forth and deny! Grow numb and flicker! Disrupt sleep! Crawling queen of iron! Eternally self-destructing doll of mud! Unite! Repulse! Fill with soil and know your own powerlessness! Hadō # 90 Black Coffin!"

The sky all around the entire mountainous expanse begins to be consumed by an eerie void like box forming not around them but around the planet itself.

"Damn I have to work fast" Kisuke rushed towards Aizen while avoiding the whip like spikes of Reiryoku. Once he gets close enough Kisuke activates the special effect of his Bankai to reconstruct anything he touches.

"I may not have enough time to stop you perfectly but I have more then enough time to stop this destruction you desire Aizen!" Kisuke quickly changes the effects of how Hadō #90 was attended to work into a vastly different Hadō spell with unknown effects upon its user.

Once Kisuke finishes the restructuring of your Hadō spell the surrounding eerie void begins to move towards you forming a more condensed black box slowing consuming you. "Kisuke!!!" you roar in defiance before the eerie void like box consumes you, and vanishes without a trace with you trapped inside.

Here is an improved version of the beginning to the story. It's vastly different then the original chapter 1, and hopefully better. I hope you have a great day, and I'll start working on the next improved chapter.

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