Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!

this is very frustrating I was expecting this story to get better because in the the blurb it sounded like that vol 2 was going to get better than volume one when it just got worse it would have just been better if you carried on on with the story and it just came out random and mismatched because she dies in the end then in volume to you carry on as if she's not dead I'm confused at least keeps the storyline I was happy at first but just disappointed I was expecting her to have escaped and made her way back to her family then sudden she goes on adventures and it doesn't even tell us about how she got back to them

2020 is going to end before vol.2 comes out lol.........................................................................................................

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i love this book. its the best its so entertaining. I've been reading this book for a long time and I just cant stop with it. i freakin love it 😁😁😁 keep up the good work

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There are many loopholes in this story that do make readers immensely frustrated but in anyway, I think this is a good story but not in the best quality. Inserting comedy randomly in not great idea as not only did it make more loopholes but it also decreased the writing quality. I hope for author to fix it a little. I just also really appreciate how this confident author continues to write even with negative comments so I specially gifted a review of my personal opinion.

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There are recurring jokes and overused jokes... please learn the difference. Mc and so called goddess crying is funny once or twice but it become purely cringe after too many time. Villains are not even two dimensional, they're one dimensional and I don't really mind about it because you're trying to write "comedy" but at least try to write your main characters personality consistence.

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They are probably just very, very, jealous of you! They probably found out that you are a fantastic, great, writer! Keep up the great job!🤩🤩

Poor little girl she just needs to open up to her friends and tell them what's going on I bet Sylvie Will destroyed that family real good!!

I wish you'd keep it on One character the little white haired girl she saw Bunny she just goes around sleeping everywhere she was promised to learn other magic but it seems like she's forgotten about it

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I like powerful MCs but I don't like overpowered MCs cuz its gonna be a little boring and predictable. Iys quiye unfair you know to have it all without working hard to achieve such feat. To have the money, looks, family, power, friends, and love life.

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