Reviews of Age of Adventure
Age of Adventure
Keikokumars
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
I'm sorry, I really tried to enjoy reading this novel. But the quality is really bad. I feel like my neurons are committing sepuku as I write this. Please find a proof reader first of all. As for the story, nothing out of the ordinary at least up to the I read. And that is the first impression.
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I say, don't give up on this novel because of the very, very bad grammar in the first chapters. Also, you might think that this is a version of Moonlight Sculptor, and that the MC is like Weed. It looks like, but it is not. Although the development of the history is fast and you can't get yourself to like some of the characters, but you might like it nonetheless.
Loveable characters, great side characters, a world able to develop and change, and overall AMAZING!!!! Love reading this, and will continue to read, since it's just that good. 9/10 would recommend to anyone that's looking for a powerful main character that isn't overly arrogant and uses his brain to solve most problems.
I could not take the bad grammar, I read someone said it will be better. They might be right. However, usually people just get used to it over time. Character development in the start is shallow and copied. Story is a typical "MC is a never bored character that can train forever without stopping and needs money for his sick mother, but could not finish more that high school" Might be better later, but I would bet it is just average.
This is literally a LMS fanfic and a bad one at that. There is nothing wrong with gaining inspiration, but ripping the MCs motivation to play the game, the games creators motivation to create the game, the entire login and character-creation sequence from LMS is just too much for me to overlook, and i last read that novel 3 years ago, yet could instantly point this out. Uninstall life pls.
Please edit and re-release the first chapters. Could not get past the first half of chapter one due to all the grammatical errors. For an English reader it is very offputting to think that the author thought it was acceptable to publish their work without a proper edit. I am not able to stomach reading past the first chapter with the sheer number of incorrect sentences I had to make sense of. I like the idea behind the novel and love political struggles/strategy/kingdom building/action/adventure but I hate improper English.
Tactics and strategies of epic proportions. A good novel to follow for people who like kingdom building and thought-evoking philosophies. Legend says that Aero's fate lies in the hands of Keikokumars as he is more proficient at scheming and plotting... *ugh storybuilding. Please find an editor to improve the quality of the story. There are grammar mistakes and run-on sentences among others. Just find yourself a good strategist... *cough editor.
