Reviews of Against Heaven's Will
Against Heaven's Will
Piokilek
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Author here! Thank you for coming to my novel! This book is a continuation of my first, Spirit Cultivation but it can be read as a stand-alone novel. I can promise it will be not only much better but we will rise to the Heavens with it! See you at the top!
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“Spirit Cultivation” is the first book. This continuation of Xuefeng’s story, along with his many powerful and gorgeous wives, is a journey worth traversing. Follow his epic tale. You will fall in love with his wives and each of their unique stories and how they all came to fall in love with the same man. Powerful element cultivation combined with Fate spirit companions leads to immense strength....eventually.
(as of 254) Romance have degraded very badly, i mean xiufeng again goes and just start basically sexually assaulting another woman who is sexually depraved, xiufeng gives the excuse that he is doing this for his lovers, wow! then why don't his lovers have 'fun' with other men to 'help' him? I mean he already have 15+ lovers but he still goes and start having s*x with her, its not even at the development as of nuwa, I mean show your elemental bracelet rather sexually assaulting her, I am just waiting when he will start sending his women to other men for taking their 'help'. The romance was well developed in spirit cultivation but in AHW, xiufeng just has become a s*x toy who only know to show his sexual prowess to women, same with katherine, liu xinyu, mermaid queen. The harem has also become very big, no screentime for likes of lisa, yu, wuying, etc. He just come to new place, it has a sexually depraved queen, to which he takes advantage and start having sexual relationship with him, no time for other girls who were well developed personalities with their characters, but now there are only lustful women left-katherine, xinyu, mermaid queen, etc. Only 10 lines of lemon was shown with lisa, like seriously? and here its been 3 chapters, he is sexually assaulting another woman, no development, no personality, no fluff, no romance, just lusting. Just the same thing with Nuwa, or rather it was 2-3 times more rushed, no badassness from xiufeng now, no training, all the things are done by ling and ming, he did not even cultivate properly, I have no qualms with dual cultivation but he do not do anything except that, everything from absorption to implementation are done by ling and ming, he just spout BS which he is very proud of and start showing his sexual prowess, basically he has become a s*x toy, he have 15+ women now but his little brother lose control in front of any beautiful woman, I really think that this guy now needs to be ntr'ed only then his eyes will open, the quality of harem, development and romance has degraded to sh*t from spirit cultivation. DISAPPOINTING. Spirit cultivation was one of the best novel i have ever read with great romance, the starting of AHW was also great but slowly slowly now it has very much degraded, basically the women are being forgotten now, they are not even mentioned 30-40 chapters, by which there had not been any interaction, *sigh* I hoped for much much better honestly. Just wanna say THANK YOU for SPIRIT CULTIVATION.
keeps getting better the more i read, i dont even know how it is possible to get better, the only thing a cant keep wainting is when liu mei turns 16 and watch the ring with the nightgown xuefeng bought her and see if she keeps what she said years ago: I will keep it for my birthday's night. If you don't come, I will ascend, find you there and show you… You won't be able to reject me again after seeing me in it…
Clearly the Author has some bias towards other harem members.. *Nuwa* cough.. while other members only get mentioned by name and not having any lines. Xiao Wen was my favorite from the start and now she barely gets mentioned and just fades in the backgroud Also author kinda bummed out the plot of the Liena's fate organization of the earth realm. They are trying to open the fate kingdom as their goal when it just suddenly opened when MC kidnap a girl and Fate king was like "kill him for me". meh
This book (amd its predecessor, 'Spirit Cultivation') are amazing and in depth story's that follow the intense life of an otherworlder, Su Yang. He and his bevvy of beauties go about dominating everyone that has the balls to stand up to them. This origional masterpiece jas everything. You will laugh, cry, get enraged, only to laugh again the next chapter. I would highly recomend this book to anyone who knows how to read, and, while not completely necessary, I suggest having a look at Spirit Cultivation 1st as you will be missing out on a substantial amount of info/lore. Now, stop reading this stupid review and read this awesome book!!
Since this is book 2 we can carry over some of the previous ratings. WQ, SoU and WB all get top marks from me, Updates have been plentiful lately since this used to be a 3 chapter a week series. I rarely get pulled out of the story due to writing issues so the quality is there and the world background seems deep. Both SD and CD have similar issues and thats due to some characters being seemingly forgotten, for example Princess Shan and Tianshi's sister, she disappeared from the narrative for so long that I've forgotten her name, to be fair they were mentioned in one of the last SC chapters. Overall this is a good series and the second book has a chance to elevate it.
