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This isnt a villain novel dont get baited, mc is just ruthless but even that its only to ppl who provoke him. Hes a system slave, completely dependant on it and its powers. The 'protags' are more evil than the mc himself. In recent chapters its gone with the cliche 'I will make you my woman' route zzzzzzzz. The mc is just a young master, slapping faces and dispensing righteousness. Author seems to think that just because someone goes against an individual labelled the 'protag' it means they are a villain, dissapointing.
i don't do reviews often, but figured i should because somehow this novel has high ratings. i'll start off with the writing quality, it's poor. the english isn't good, the writing feels robotic and detached, it's not immersive at all and is sometimes confusing due to the poor english. idk about the stability of updates so i just put that at 5 stars. story development is weird, doesn't make sense, there's tons of plot holes and it feels like the author completely forgets everything he wrote about 3 chapters ago, it's like the men in black wiped his memory every 3 chapters. as for character design, it's really awkward, pretty stupid especially the "protagonists" who aren't really protagonists, they're just normal stupid villains called the protagonist while the mc is a slave to the system and an idiot, other characters also feel detached and not real. as for the world background, i haven't read enough to really have a good opinion about it, but so far it's nothing special, and is not that great.
Another bait dog novel. The whole thing about him being a villain is FALSE, he is literally a normal MC and the protags are actually young master brain damaged type 3rd rate villains who spew 10 IQ comments and actions. How anyone thought this was a good novel is beyond me. The world structure and the other characters make 0 sense, a literal mortal who can hold more money than the cultivatuon country, thats like a 5 IQ idea that wouldnt work at all, and a big guild master has like 0 bodyguards for his weak daughter in her birthday party and she gets kidnapped with 0 difficulty even a retard hobo can do it
Chapter 10 Status: Writing Quality: ⭐️ MTL Stability of Updates: ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ One chapter a day or so Story Development: ⭐️⭐️ I am to lazy to write, but it=s worse than those novels in Trial reads Character Design: ⭐️⭐️ Bland, one dimensional characters with 0 depth or personality World Background: ⭐️⭐️ Only a little is explained at the start, but it‘s incomplete, disorganized and useless for the most part
Incredibly boring, the mc does things just because the author says so, he doesn't have any motivation or desire, he just exists and reacts to the system. His "peak cultivation" means nothing because mr.author was smart enough to downplay it right away by introducing this so called world awakening, his cultivation is so irrelevant that he shows it off in chapter 9 just to save a girl he doesn't care about (oh by the way, we have the out of touch boomer: "it's just a woman" kind of writing so expect every female character to be one dimensional shells and massively objectified)
At first 100 chapters it's good the plot is nice but when it comes to 100+ the novel become slow it's is already 100 chapters yet he still doesn't solve the protagonist (Xiao) and in the 100+ chapters everything is only about the travel of Lin fan having dinner with his parents visiting her girlfriend nothing else it's getting boring and one more thing it's not like a villain at all more like Xiao is the villain here
I have read till 45th chapter and have to say the grammar in this novel isn't preferable. I know this novel is made after the novel "I became a second generation villain"(which is a great novel 100% recommended). But the author of this novel has poorly displayed the plot. there are many plotholes but that can be ignored if you have patience. And the most disappointing thing is the "villain" is turning more into a protagonist. I don't know after chapter 45 but it has been mostly disappointing to me. Certain acts dosent suit a VILLAIN. Also the dialogues of supporting characters are too trash. I won't say anything anymore. But i bet this wouldn't quench your thirst for VILLAINS.