Le Tian
I loved the idea behind this book. A futuristic AI transmigrates into a book. Unfortunately, it just was not implemented well enough. There were parts with obvious plot-holes as well as things happening that did not make sense. This was because the author would leave out details, leaving you as a reader with the job to assume or make up the missing pieces yourself in order to make sense of the story. I did like some of the story though. The FL with her robotic tendencies were interesting, and she has a sharp tongue used to eloquently tell off the antagonists. She’s also retained her robotic strength and abilities (without a logical reason as to how or why but just accept it 🤷🏽♀️). I had a good laugh in some places too. Overall, it’s an okay story that needs proper editing.
Very entertaining. The biggest plus for me is that, unlike other similar novels, FL is also very strong but so far there is no "she's strong and smart, but he's stronger and smarter" cliché and I absolutely love it for this reason alone (you have no idea how many novel's I've dropped so far because this ML-must-be-better-in-everything-than-the-FL trope). The plot is so far ok, without major plot holes, but characters are rather superficial though very consistent, which is another big plus (FL doesn't change personalities nor becomes overly weak when ML is present). The greatest con is that many things are left out - like they're in the dressing room but in the same sentence he's pulling her in the car: the whole dressing, leaving the dressing room, going to the parking lot is left out and it's up to reader to solve the steps in between. Jumping trough the scenes happens quite a bit unfortunately, and it might get frustrating in the future, but in these chapters I've been able to overlook it on the account of the good plot and fast paced tempo in these 30 chapters (which I like since in many novels, one scene is stretched for days in short chapters, here at least the plot is going somewhere). Translation is very good, 1 or 2 strange sentences in 30chapters, but overall above average. I definitely recommend it and hope it gets selected!
The FL here is a little smart and she is talented. I wish that there were more scenes between the ML and FL that shows their caring and I hope they remain in good terms in the future as well and no misunderstandings will occur between them due to other people. I hope they trust each other and FL will try to hide less things from ML. Overall a fine story!
I do think that the writer here is really good. The FL was previously an AI who transmigrated to a normal human thus explains her behavior (of being cold and emotionless) and her vast knowledge in science and in other aspects. It is just in sync. Unlike other novels wherein you get confused as to how they have developed super skills. She was supposedly the perfect human but unfinished so she has some flaws. Well I am looking forward to this being translated. I am giving up on the raws since it seems like we won't be able to find them. Lol