Reviews of Adelrams tail

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please write more because a story with potential wasted is not a story at all also i want to read more because i find it interesting and you shouldn't give up on a good story you should just seek make even better and want to write even more i've said my peace now it's your decision

I really liked the story but the updating... yea not so much would've been cool to what could've happend Hope author comes back and updates ///////////////// //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

it's pretty good so far but like there's no exposition so the background is a bit vague ................................................................................................................................................

uhm please be nice, story writing is still new to me and im still trying to improve, any advice is appreciated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!