Adem_Thomas
I really like the concept and the plot, but the poor grammar, typos, incorrect words, and inconsistencies make this story hard to read. I have read all the chapters here and on the previous version. If you are like me and can read over/through the typos by mentally substituting the correct word, then you can get through this story. Even then the author could use a lot more time Googling then words he/she wants to use that come from other stories. It’s almost insulting that the author knows he/she can’t remember how to spell a word, but instead of looking it up, he/she just guesses. I would love to read more of this story, but it needs a lot of work.
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looking good wish the chapters were a bit longer and missed most of hogwarts part or is this just marvel? 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140