A Writer's Goal

Mazda Alpha, indeed the most successful human planet in thousands of years, this is the place for anyone that more than anything else, wishes to shine and strive for a chance outside the local market of opportunities, after all, who would want to be the most popular singer, scientist or developer of a world when you can do that on thousands of planets! Even better, if you prefer the lawless life, this is also the place to go! Is it easy though? Of course not! Talent, hard work and luck, those are the 3 things that will decide whether or not you can leave the ranks of the unknown ghosts and climb the stairs of your dreams, no matter if what you wish is merely to find a man or a woman to marry, improve your business, become the most powerful leader of an underworld mafia, or to merely find a good and stable office job! _________________________________________________________ I'm not a native English speaker, still learning, and my grammar can be really wrong sometimes if you find any errors, please help me correct it by commenting on the right way to write whatever is wrong. Like my story? Help me make it better by letting me know the problems with it, be it character development, story development, or any other thing. This is basically my first original story, so I'm not that good, please be patient with me!