A VERY BERRY ADVENTURE

first time writing and I know im garbage so I can take criticism but please criticise the hell out of this. also NO HAREM even though I like those novels I am not dooming my story even more by adding fifty girls or boys to my MC. NOW ONTO THE REAL SYNOPSIS Burt a average male by all standards saves a cute loli on his way to pick up bacon for dinner gets 3 wishes after truck-kun brutally runs him over and sends him to tge afterlife lets see where this story goes!