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A Traveler's Legend: Leisurely Living My Life In A Normal World

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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4amaturewriter

like why do authors give MC ****ed life but make em normal? -we have an MC neglected and abused and abandoned by scummy parents, then killed by them.....he cant be normal,,,then he has a family in his next life, but they leave him, and only explanation they give him is a letter,,,,its retarded, at the very least he should be angry and hateful for being abandoned and ****....like my point is if u give an MC a ****ed up life, why dont u use it?....if u wanted something sad, him being an orphan would've been enough...its stupid. Then theres the harem, the MC has a ****ty life, he cant accept **** easily, so him accepting some random chicks he just met as friends is weird, how come he inst wary of them? Also, to everyone that that says to take yasaka and grayfia into harem,,,,u guys want **** or what?....there cant be any CD, it'll just be forced.....think about it....one is a mom, the other is a chick who was in a loyal relationship for 400 yrs, and said chick left family and clan for lover [yes there was another reason but it was half]....so its impossible unless its forced.....like how come no one wants a story with good CD?, and without a manwhore MC, or some NTR, moms, wife ****? like if u still want em, do it OC,,,no mom or wife, change everything is what I am saying

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Rimuru_sama
Rimuru_samaLv6Rimuru_sama

I ald like this novel This is going to be part of my favourite to read Hope you keep writing and don’t drop and if you can pls have grayfia Lavinia Levi Gabriel yasaka serafall griselda pls have them be part of the harem And hope you won’t drop this If possible can you put list the harem thank you Good luck gambateh 👍👍👍👍👍

JadePanda003
JadePanda003Lv11JadePanda003

Kinda wonky when you first posted it but this new version is great! Looking forward to how this will turn out. There's also the Pokemon fic I passed to you. I want to see how you'll continue it! Good luck to you, newbie-kun.

PandaSempai
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Alright! This is the Author-san and I am here to shamelessly write a 5 star review to my own fanfic. Now, if you guys are curious as to how this novel will go, then please read this! Based on the plot and my own wishes(which is super important since I write for my own self satisfaction), the story's main setting will be at an Alternate Universe which bore a big similarity with the Draconic Deus Universe(DxD). In simple terms, it will be a crossover of some animes but the number of animes that will be used will not be too many as I don't want the fanfic to feel too crowded. The idea is to start the story in Japan and slowly expand on the scope. Some things that aren't on the main story will be introduced. For example, the idea about magic. Magic in DxD Universe has not been touched as much and was only described as, "Using lights to create magic circle and calculate things to come up with this certain phenomena". That's how I understood it, anyway. Now, I saw this one novel where the idea of magic in it clicked with the description of magic in the DxD Universe. Slowly, a few more animes were added and this story's rough outline was created! A few animes will be included. There are some that are already decided. Those animes were: 1) Highschool DxD 2) Gabriel DropOut- this was added because its idea of an Angel School fits with what I want and to also add some Angel Characters. 3) Masamune-kun no Revenge 4) And some other animes. As I don't have a discord server(since I don't want to immerse myself too much in chatting and forget writing a chapter), please just comment here to ask if ever you have some questions in mind.

Obsideon
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Manabu_Horikita
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ErjasD
ErjasDLv13ErjasD

Author.. can you tell me who will be in the harem?🙂 I'm at chapter 4 and I really like where this going🙂 Also the word length per chap is quite satisfying 😃😃

Ajpar
AjparLv13Ajpar

Great book so far...................................................................................................................................................................

bigpollo
bigpolloLv14bigpollo

Seems pretty average. There are a good amount if spelling and grammar issues in each chapter so I recommend the author get an editor. The shift between dialogue are sometime confusing and the first couple of chapters are a jumbled mess. For webnovel its okay tho, I am just a bit to critical.

AllFiction
AllFictionLv3AllFiction

Written in Google Translate The story is good, the development of the characters is not denied, but ... somehow, the work becomes boring. It seems that it is slow, the 'own' things that the Author is creating don't animate at all, dozens of female characters have already been introduced in the Protagonist's childhood, I don't even want to see him grow up and meet the Principals of the DxD Work. .. I will take an extremely long break from the Work, so in the future, maybe I will come back if I already have a legal part.

IdioticBaka
IdioticBakaLv3IdioticBaka

Your the best author!! Thank you for writing my favorite anime that is, masamune kun no revenge... Your my top fav author now... Dont drop this... Or else Imma hunt you down...

Kairyiou
KairyiouLv4Kairyiou

Gonna wait to masamune kun revenge if it goes to that part lol not yet gonna read but first time seeing a masamune kun revenge fan fic so got a big expectations to it :)

Kirito_Tazu
Kirito_TazuLv5Kirito_Tazu

a little extraordinary with the addition of slice of life and that is the result of your own writing not the copy paste of a novel. You're Amazing Author-san Keep up of your the good work

nana_heiun
nana_heiunLv3nana_heiun

I am the exp of my Sword. webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. Unknown to death, nor known to life. Have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those hands will never hold anything. So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

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Ked18
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Ruben_lopez
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_Cooldude_
_Cooldude_Lv6_Cooldude_

One of the best dxd fanfic, with good world building and a great development of relationship between mc and other important characters. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Pimple_Face_13
Pimple_Face_13Lv4Pimple_Face_13

At the beginning I was confused with what was happening but with the next chapters and their world building it filled me in with what was happening, and with your humour to me it was perfect. This is a very unique fanfic and I hope you continue to write.